The Hidden Guest
Family Microfiction
Everyone in the family has a role to play-including the unseen ones. -Michelle Liew
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The Lees always prepared an empty chair at family reunions. They told themselves that it wasn’t a superstitious streak - just a tradition they conformed to after Grandpa Lee passed, leaving it to them.
After their reunion dinner, Aunt Qiumei, ever the ghost junkie, stayed behind for a chat. “They believe that every family has an unseen member. One whose presence made a significant difference, although identifying them is a challenge.”
Karen chortled. “Gives me the shivers.” She paused thoughtfully. “Grandpa was always a neat freak though. We'd know.”
After the dinner, Thomas collected the dirty dishes from the table. Ever respectful of traditions, he whispered, “Thanks for coming.”
The wind chime by the window sounded, its tune cheery. The family cleared the table in a hurry, leaving the chairs out of place. It was close to bedtime when they finished dinner.
When the family came into the kitchen for breakfast the next morning, they found the table uncluttered and the chairs pushed in.
Karen stared at the empty chair, feeling goosebumps forming. She looked at Thomas. “Did you tidy up?”
Thomas shrugged. “Wasn't me. I was dead beat. Guess our unseen relative found us too messy.”
The windchime sounded again, as if in agreement.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (11)
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Such an amazing and creative story. I love the empty chair and place setting for someone who's no longer there.
Love how family traditions can have such a special meaning, even in small ways.
A little scary but a little charming lol. Only because he wasn't the aggressive type of ghost. Love this.
Sort of scary, sort of comforting, Michelle. Nice blend of the two.
Great creepy microfiction.
What a fun twist! Grandpa Lee’s ghostly cleaning skills—top-notch! That wind chime agreeing? Pure chef’s kiss. Love how spooky turned sweet so effortlessly!
Your stories are a treat. I have started writing a story in my head immediately, inspiration hit me. This was so me, I love ghost stories,
Whimsical and slightly eerie. Very well written. Don’t tell them… It was me. ☺️
Neat but creepy. Loved your story
I'd be so creeped out if it was me hahahaha. Loved your story!