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The Headless Buddha

A Story Every Day in 2024 4th Feb 35/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago 2 min read
Photo author's own

Prompt number thirty-five:

The picture is the prompt.

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"And so I told her that I wasn't happy and that something needed to be done about it."

Mark was drifting in and out of his wife's monologue like he was listening to a bad radio reception. It was always the same: something wasn't right; someone needed to be told. He very rarely listened nowadays, offering a supportive "Mmm" in what he thought was the right spot and then cruising right back into whatever he had been thinking about.

He preferred the space inside his head.

He didn't always feel this way about Val. He's not sure when she started to become so negative. Couldn't pinpoint an exact moment where she started to tarnish. He supposed it was just life. Wear and tear. You couldn't keep that glow forever. Although he did think that his life would probably still have a lustre if she didn't relentlessly rub it away.

"Have you seen the extension that the Joneses are building? What an eyesore. I can't believe they ever got planning, can you?"

Mark "Mmm" 'd again and drifted back into his thoughts. He liked walking. It gave Val the chance to air her grievances of which there were many and he was allowed to be distracted. Not like at home. No, eye contact had to be maintained at all times otherwise she knew he wasn't paying attention and look out! If he was caught, he'd get chastised. Again.

He looked around him as they plodded around the town. There was always something to see. You got to see so much more on foot. Funny little features at eye level, the slowness of pace meaning that you could go panoramic and pick up weathervanes or strange rooflines or distinctive door-knockers.

Or headless statues.

On the wall bordering a house that they frequently went past, there was a buddha. Now headless. Actually, it still had its head and was cradling it, almost reverently. Someone had placed it in its lap. With a sense of humour? Its serene face was the same but its decapitation was awful. Its essence was there still but it presented as something else.

It had power and was powerless.

Strangely, Mark identified with that buddha.

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365 words

The picture is my own. It was a bizarre thing to see and even stranger to see where the head had been placed. I could have talked about the violence of how the figure had lost its head but instead, I've focused on a character seeing it.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Is it bad if I found the decapitated Buddha cradling his head super hilarious? One day, my sense of humour is gonna land me in jail 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your story. Poor Mark though.

  • My first thought upon seeing your title for this was, "Oh no! Now Ichabod Crane will find himself chased out of town even when he's meditating!" Sadly, I think most of us can relate. Doesn't everyone want others to listen when they're speaking? And don't we all tend to grow weary if someone is constantly going on about something or another, especially when they're complaining, & just end up feeling like we're carrying our head in a basket?

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    That wasna really good way to approach the story of that pic. Well done. And poor Mark. Lol

  • John Cox2 years ago

    As always, this is a well developed and written tale. The fracturing of a relationship juxtaposed by the headless Buddha. He has tuned in the world and tuned out his wife. I could feel the love that he had once felt for her slipping away into the cocoon of his thoughts. Very sad.

  • Teresa Renton2 years ago

    This is such good writing! You know how to engage and keep a reader. I love your micros. It would even work without the last sentence xx

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Rachel, you have such a knack of capturing the essence of your characters, that I see them as real. So much talent!! I love the headless Buddha as an analogy...brilliant! Mark just needs to tell Val to stop with her Nancy Negative crap and get his head back on straight, too. lol

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