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The haunting melody

story of a brave girl

By zohra talibiPublished 2 years ago 2 min read
The haunting melody
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In the quiet, remote village of Blackwood, nestled deep within a dense forest, there stood an abandoned mansion known to the locals as the "House of Echoes." Legend had it that the mansion was cursed, and no one dared to approach it after sundown.

One fateful evening, a curious traveler named Sarah arrived in Blackwood. She had heard whispers about the House of Echoes and couldn't resist the temptation to explore it. Armed with a lantern and an unwavering determination, she ventured into the decaying mansion as the moon cast eerie shadows through the broken windows.

As Sarah moved deeper into the mansion, she heard faint, haunting melodies that seemed to resonate from the very walls themselves. The music was achingly beautiful, but it carried an ominous undertone that sent shivers down her spine.

Ignoring the dread gnawing at her, Sarah followed the ethereal music up a grand, winding staircase. On the top floor, she discovered an old, dusty piano in a dimly lit room. The room appeared untouched by time, as if frozen in a bygone era.

Compelled by an irresistible force, Sarah hesitantly approached the piano. Her trembling fingers hovered above the keys, and before she knew it, she began to play. The haunting melody filled the room, echoing through the mansion.

As the last note faded, a chilling presence enveloped her. Sarah's heart raced as she realized she was not alone. A shadowy figure emerged from the darkness, its ghostly eyes locked onto her. It was a woman dressed in a tattered, blood-soaked gown, her face twisted in anguish.

The phantom reached out towards Sarah, its bony fingers grasping for her soul. In a panic, Sarah fled the room, leaving behind the cursed piano and the sinister spirit that haunted it.

The village of Blackwood never saw Sarah again. Some say she was consumed by the malevolent force that dwelled within the House of Echoes, forever bound to play the haunting melody that lured unwary souls to their doom.

To this day, the village of Blackwood remains shrouded in an eerie silence, and the House of Echoes continues to stand as a grim reminder of the terrible fate that befell those who dared to venture into its accursed depths.

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  • C.S LEWIS2 years ago

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  • C.S LEWIS2 years ago

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