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The Girl Who Waited by the Sea

Some loves never fade, no matter how long the wait.

By Express LanePublished 5 months ago 4 min read

The sea was a thief. It stole things from the land and held them hostage in its fathomless depths. But for Elara, it had stolen a future. Every day for twenty years, she walked down the winding path to the jagged cliffs overlooking the ocean. The townspeople of Port Caelum called her "the girl who waited," a title that had long since replaced her name. Her ritual was as predictable as the tides: she would arrive just before sunset, a solitary figure etched against the dramatic sky, and watch the waves for a sail that would never come.

Her story began with a boy named Finn. He was the son of a fisherman, with a spirit as wild and untamable as the sea he loved. They were children of the same coast, their lives intertwined since they were small. They built sandcastles together, learned to skip stones, and fell in love under the pale light of a moon-drenched sky. Their love was a legend in the small town, a tale of first loves and whispered promises.

However, the sea called to Finn, and he answered. He told Elara he was going on a long journey for adventure and fortune, promising to return a rich man. He would build her a house far from the sea, a cottage with a garden and no salt spray on the windows. He gave her a polished sea glass, a shard of green he had found on the shore, telling her to keep it until his return. "This piece of the sea will always bring me back to you," he promised.

That was the last time she saw him.

The first few years were filled with hope. Elara received letters from faraway ports, words of love and anticipation arriving on ink-stained paper. But one day, the letters stopped. The fishing trawler, the Sea Serpent, returned with news of a violent storm off the coast of the Silver Isles. Finn’s ship, the Morning Star, was lost in the squall with all hands.

The town mourned. The fishermen's wives wore black, and the tavern was filled with sad stories of the sea's power. The town expected Elara to mourn as well, to wear a widow's weeds and find comfort in shared grief. But Elara didn't believe them. The sea glass she held was still warm with his promise.

So she waited.

The hope that had once been a blazing fire slowly dwindled to a small, persistent ember. She took a job selling shells and small paintings to tourists. Her talent for capturing the sea's ever-changing moods blossomed into a quiet, artistic life. The town changed around her. Old shops closed, new ones opened, and the cobblestone streets were repaved. But Elara remained, a living monument to a love story that everyone else had forgotten.

One brisk afternoon, a woman with kind eyes and salt-and-pepper hair, a tourist new to the area, bought one of Elara's seascapes. "You're the girl who waited, aren't you?" the woman asked gently. "My grandmother used to tell me about you."

Elara simply nodded, her gaze fixed on the endless horizon.

"My grandmother also told me," the woman continued, "that stories are like shells. They get smoothed over by the tide, but if you hold them close, you can still hear the sea."

That night, for the first time in years, Elara didn't go to the cliff. Instead, she stayed in her small cottage, the sea glass clutched in her hand. The town's legend of a faithful girl had masked a deeper truth: her waiting had become a prison. She had held onto a ghost, letting life pass her by while the waves eroded her youth. The sea, she realized, wasn't a thief. It was a mirror, reflecting her own unmoving reflection.

The next morning, she walked to the shore, but not to wait. She walked to the water's edge and, with a silent prayer for a love that had once been, she opened her hand and let the green sea glass fall into the surf. The waves, with a soft hiss, took it back.

As she turned to walk away, a man with a weathered face and kind, grey eyes was walking towards her. He was an artist, a traveler who had recently moved to Port Caelum. He had seen her from afar and had been captivated by the quiet sorrow in her stance. "Excuse me," he said, his voice as gentle as the morning breeze. "I'm looking for a woman who paints seascapes. I hear she's a local legend."

Elara looked at him, her heart doing a strange, unfamiliar flutter. For the first time in twenty years, she saw the sea not as a mirror of her past but as a promise of the future. The sea had stolen her first love, but in a small, quiet way, it was returning her to herself, to a life no longer waiting, but finally living. Her story was no longer about a girl who waited, but a woman who, at long last, was ready to begin again.

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