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The Ghost Train

Act 1: The Disappearance

By Shane D. SpearPublished 10 months ago 9 min read

Chapter 2: The Pattern Emerges

The crystalline samples gleamed under the microscope's harsh light, their structure unlike anything Sarah had seen in her eight years as a forensic analyst. She adjusted the magnification, watching as the intricate patterns shifted and refracted light in ways that defied conventional crystallography.

Dr. Eliza Nautterly, head of Rockhaven PD's forensic chemistry department, peered over Sarah's shoulder. "Fascinating," she murmured. "Not ice, not salt, not mineral deposits commonly found in transit systems."

"Can you identify it?" Sarah asked, not taking her eyes off the specimen.

Dr. Nautterly pursed her lips. "I've run it through every database we have access to. No matches." She handed Sarah a printout. "The molecular structure is... unusual. Almost like it's in a state of flux, shifting between different configurations."

"That's impossible," Sarah said, finally looking up.

"So is finding an unidentifiable substance at a public train station," Dr. Nautterly countered. "Where exactly did you collect this?"

"Platform 3 at Thornwood Station. It was in the cracks near where three people disappeared."

Dr. Nautterly raised an eyebrow. "The Ghost Train cases? Reeves mentioned you were chasing urban legends."

Sarah bristled. "I'm following evidence. Three missing persons, all last seen at the same location, all researching the same local folklore. And now this." She gestured to the microscope. "Unidentifiable crystalline residue at the exact spot where they vanished."

"I'm not dismissing your investigation," Dr. Nautterly said gently. "Just pointing out that we need more data. I'll send samples to the university lab for advanced analysis, but it'll take time."

Sarah nodded, knowing time was something she didn't have. The next new moon was only two days away.

Back at her desk, Sarah expanded her search parameters, pulling up historical missing persons cases with any connection to Thornwood Station. The results trickled in slowly at first—a businessman in 1976, a nurse in 1982, two college students in 1995—but as she refined her search to include disappearances near midnight, a disturbing pattern emerged.

"Twenty-seven cases," she whispered to herself, staring at the spreadsheet she'd compiled. Twenty-seven people who had vanished from Thornwood Station since its opening in 1893. Not an alarming number spread across 130 years, except for one detail: every disappearance occurred at or near midnight on a new moon.

The most recent cases before Thomas Chen, Maria Delgado, and Jamal Washington had been a cluster in the early 2000s. Then nothing for almost twenty years until now.

Sarah cross-referenced lunar cycles with the disappearance dates, pinning a timeline to her evidence board. The pattern was undeniable—and it pointed to something beyond conventional criminal activity.

Her desk phone rang, startling her from her thoughts.

"Mathews," she answered.

"Analyst Mathews? This is Officer Rivera at the front desk. There's someone here insisting on speaking with whoever's handling the Thornwood Station disappearances. Says she witnessed something."

Sarah's pulse quickened. "I'll be right down."

The woman waiting in the interview room looked to be in her mid-sixties, with silver-streaked black hair pulled into a tight bun and sharp, observant eyes that tracked Sarah's entrance. She wore a transit authority uniform with a name badge that read "V. Patel."

"Ms. Patel?" Sarah extended her hand. "I'm Sarah Mathews, forensic analyst assigned to the Thornwood disappearances."

"Veera," the woman corrected, her handshake firm. "I'm a night shift supervisor at Thornwood. Been there twenty-two years."

Sarah nodded, taking a seat across from her. "Officer Rivera mentioned you witnessed something?"

Veera's eyes darted to the door, then back to Sarah. "You'll think I'm crazy. Everyone does when I talk about it."

"Try me," Sarah said simply.

"Three nights ago, I was doing my final inspection before closing the station. It was nearly midnight, and normally Platform 3 is deserted by then." Veera's fingers twisted together nervously. "I saw that young man—the one in the news, Jamal Washington. He was standing alone at the far end of the platform, looking at his watch."

Sarah leaned forward. "Go on."

"The air changed," Veera continued, her voice dropping. "Got colder. Misty. My radio started crackling with static. Then..." She hesitated.

"Then what?" Sarah prompted gently.

"A train pulled into the station. Silver, gleaming like it was brand new. Windows frosted over so you couldn't see inside. No transit authority markings. No conductor." Veera's eyes locked with Sarah's. "It wasn't one of ours. It wasn't anyone's."

Sarah kept her expression neutral, though her heart was racing. "What happened next?"

"The doors opened. Jamal hesitated for a moment, then stepped aboard. The doors closed, and the train... it didn't just leave the station. It vanished into the fog." Veera shook her head. "One moment it was there, the next—gone. And the fog went with it."

"Did you report this?" Sarah asked, already knowing the answer.

Veera gave a bitter laugh. "To who? Last time I mentioned seeing that train, they sent me to mandatory psychological evaluation and threatened my pension. That was eighteen years ago, during the last cluster of disappearances."

Sarah's eyes widened. "You've seen it before?"

"Three times in my career. Always at midnight. Always on a new moon. Always followed by someone vanishing." Veera leaned forward. "Here's what you won't find in any report: after each sighting, I found these strange crystalline flakes on the platform. Like frost, but they don't melt."

Sarah pulled out her phone, showing Veera a magnified image of the crystal samples. "Like these?"

Veera's face paled. "Yes. Exactly like those."

"Why come forward now, after all these years?"

"Because it's starting again," Veera said, her voice steady despite the fear in her eyes. "And because I recognized your name from the transit authority interviews. You're actually looking for answers, not excuses."

Sarah studied the woman, finding no deception in her demeanor. "Thank you for coming forward. Would you be willing to provide a formal statement?"

"Will it help find these people?"

Sarah hesitated. "I don't know. But it might help prevent others from disappearing."

Veera nodded. "Then yes. But know this—the next new moon is tomorrow night. If the pattern holds, someone else will be at Platform 3 at midnight."

After taking Veera's statement, Sarah returned to her evidence board. The witness account corroborated the social media posts, the security footage anomalies, and the crystalline residue. It was far from conclusive proof of a supernatural train, but it was enough to warrant further investigation.

She called Lieutenant Reeves, who answered on the fourth ring. "What is it, Mathews? I'm at dinner."

"I need a surveillance team at Thornwood Station tomorrow night," Sarah said without preamble. "Platform 3, from 11 PM to 1 AM."

"For what purpose?" Reeves's voice was edged with irritation.

"I've found a pattern in the disappearances. Twenty-seven cases dating back to 1893, all at Thornwood, all at midnight, all on new moon nights. Including our three recent victims."

"And?"

"And the next new moon is tomorrow night. If someone's using this urban legend as cover for abductions, we need to be there."

The line went silent for a moment. "You have evidence this is criminal activity and not just people catching a late train?"

"I have an eyewitness who saw Jamal Washington board an unscheduled train that matched descriptions from local folklore. I have unidentifiable crystalline residue from the platform where all three victims were last seen. And I have security footage that mysteriously malfunctions at the exact time of each disappearance."

Another pause. "No surveillance team. Resources are stretched too thin."

"But—"

"However," Reeves continued, "you can set up a camera. One camera, Mathews. If you get something concrete, we'll talk about next steps."

It wasn't enough, but it was something. "Understood."

That night, Sarah couldn't sleep. The pattern was too perfect, too precise to be coincidence. Either someone was exploiting local folklore for a sophisticated abduction scheme, or something truly inexplicable was happening at Thornwood Station.

The next day passed in a blur of preparation. Sarah secured a high-definition camera with night vision capabilities and positioned it discreetly on Platform 3, angled to capture the entire area where the previous disappearances had occurred. As an extra measure, she placed sensitive electromagnetic field detectors nearby, hoping to capture data on the disturbances Veera had described.

By 11:30 PM, Sarah was in position, hidden in the shadows of an unused maintenance closet with a clear view of the platform. The station was nearly deserted, the last regular train having departed at 11:15. Only a lone custodian moved lazily through the concourse, pushing a mop across the worn tile floor.

At 11:45, the custodian finished his rounds and left. Sarah was alone in the station—or so she thought.

At 11:52, movement caught her eye. A young woman with a backpack entered Platform 3, checking her phone nervously. She wore a Rockhaven University sweatshirt and kept glancing at the empty tracks.

Sarah's stomach knotted. Another potential victim? She debated intervening immediately versus waiting to gather evidence of who—or what—was behind the disappearances.

Before she could decide, the atmosphere began to change. The temperature dropped rapidly; Sarah could see her breath fogging in the suddenly frigid air. The overhead lights dimmed and flickered. A fine mist began to creep across the platform floor, swirling around the young woman's ankles.

Sarah's EMF detector went wild, its digital readout climbing beyond the device's measurable limits. Her phone screen glitched, displaying random patterns before going dark.

11:59 PM.

The mist thickened until visibility was reduced to mere feet. Sarah strained to keep the young woman in sight, heart pounding against her ribs. This was exactly as Veera had described—exactly what the security footage had failed to capture clearly.

The silence was absolute now, broken only by a low, distant rumble that seemed to vibrate through the platform itself. The young woman stood transfixed, staring into the fog-shrouded tunnel.

Sarah reached for the station's emergency alarm, but her hand froze midway as two gleaming lights appeared in the distance, growing larger as they approached.

Midnight.

A rush of displaced air parted the mist momentarily, revealing the silhouette of an approaching train—sleek, silver, and utterly silent despite its movement. It glided into the station with impossible grace, coming to a stop precisely where the young woman waited.

Sarah squinted through the fog, trying to make out details. No transit authority markings. No visible conductor. Windows tinted so deeply they appeared black from the outside.

The Ghost Train had arrived.

A soft pneumatic hiss cut through the silence as the doors slid open, spilling golden light onto the misty platform. The young woman took a step forward, peering inside.

Sarah's training finally overcame her shock. "Wait!" she called out, bursting from her hiding place. "Don't board that train!"

But her voice seemed swallowed by the mist, not carrying even the short distance to the young woman, who showed no sign of hearing. As Sarah sprinted across the platform, the woman stepped into the train.

"Stop!" Sarah shouted, just feet away now.

The doors began to close. In that final moment before they sealed shut, Sarah caught a glimpse inside—polished wood paneling, brass fixtures, plush seating from another era. And standing just inside, watching her with knowing eyes, was the impossible figure of Thomas Chen—one of her missing persons, now reaching out a hand in invitation rather than alarm.

The doors closed with finality. The train began to move, gathering speed with unnatural quickness. Sarah reached the edge of the platform just as the last car passed, the silver exterior brushing close enough that she could have touched it.

And then, impossibly, the train didn't enter the tunnel. It simply... vanished, taking the mist with it.

Sarah stood alone on Platform 3, breathing heavily. The lights returned to normal brightness. Her phone chimed as it rebooted, the EMF detector falling silent.

At her feet, glittering in the harsh station lights, a fresh dusting of crystalline particles covered the platform where the train had been—physical evidence of something that defied explanation.

Sarah knelt, carefully collecting samples with trembling hands. Her mind raced through rational explanations, finding none that fit what she had just witnessed.

The camera. Had it captured what her own eyes could barely accept? She retrieved it with urgent steps, rewinding to review the footage.

On the small preview screen, she watched the mist form, the young woman wait, and then... static. Nothing but digital snow until the final frame showed Sarah alone on the platform, staring into empty space.

Frustration and determination warred within her. She had witnessed the Ghost Train with her own eyes, yet had no proof beyond the crystalline residue and her own testimony—which would sound as credible as any urban legend to Reeves and the department.

But Sarah knew one thing with absolute certainty: Thomas Chen, Maria Delgado, and Jamal Washington hadn't simply disappeared.

They had boarded the Ghost Train.

And they were somewhere—passengers on a journey to destinations unknown.

AdventureHorrorMysteryPsychologicalSci FithrillerYoung Adult

About the Creator

Shane D. Spear

I am a small-town travel agent, who blends his love for creating dream vacations with short stories of adventure. Passionate about the unknown, exploring it for travel while staying grounded in the charm of small-town life.

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin10 months ago

    The haunting imagery stayed with me long after I finished reading. That final twist was brilliant — it left me with chills!

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