The gambler
A classic tale told by the witnessing walls.
“If walls could talk,” whispered the ancient stone wall of the abandoned church, “they would regale tales of heartbreak, hope, and sin.”
For centuries, I stood as a silent witness to the many souls who passed through my doors. I've seen weddings, baptisms, and funerals, felt the weight of their prayers and witnessed the desperation in their eyes. But, it wasn't until the arrival of, Jack, that I truly felt the weight of sin. Jack was a notorious gambler with a rough exterior, cold eyes, and a sneer that could make the bravest of men tremble. He had a reputation for playing dirty, using any means necessary to win a game, be it cheating or threatening. He was a man who lived for the thrill of the risk, but even he didn't expect the dangerous game he was about to play in this forgotten church.
My church was just another stop in his endless pursuit of easy money, but as soon as Jack stepped inside, he knew he had found something special. He saw potential in my old stone walls, a place where he could establish a den of vice, a sanctuary for all the lost souls who sought escape from the realities of their lives.
And so, Jack and his men got to work, clearing out the pews and bringing in tables, cards, and whiskey. Night after night, the sounds of laughter and clinking glasses echoed through my halls, and the stakes were getting higher with each passing day. Jack was a master of his craft, a man who knew how to exploit the weaknesses of others for his own gain. He would sit at the head of the table, a sly grin spreading across his face as he watched the patrons, including his own brother, Bill, engage in high-stakes games of chance.
“What do you say, Bill?” Jack would say, a glint in his eye. “Are you feeling lucky tonight?”
And Bill, always eager to impress his older brother, would nod and reply, “Always, Jack. I'm never afraid of a little risk.”
Despite his tyrannical rule over the church, Jack loved his brother more than anything. He'd do anything to protect him, to keep him close. He'd always turned a blind eye, whenever patrons accused Bill of cheating, believing that his love for his brother would always win out.
But, as the days went on, Jack's demeanor would change. He'd become increasingly agitated, his temper flaring at the slightest hint of a challenge. “You're cheating!” he'd shout, slamming his hand down on the table. “I won't tolerate it!”
On that fateful night, Jack finally snapped. As the cards were dealt, Bill made a move that was clearly cheating.
“You deceitful, lying scum! How dare you try to cheat me, your own brother!” Jack roared, his face contorted in rage as he stood up from the table and brandished his gun. “I've put up with your cheating for far too long, Bill. I've always looked the other way, trying to protect you and our relationship, but this time, you've gone too far. You think you can beat me at my own game? Not in my house, not under my roof!” Jack's voice echoed through the church, and the patrons cowered in fear at the sight of the madman before them. “You'll pay for your treachery. You'll never win here. Never!”
The other patrons in the church backed away, their faces pale with fear as Jack confronted Bill.
Jack's eyes narrowed as he pointed the gun at his brother. Bill cowered, hands up in surrender.
“Please, Jack, I'm sorry! I was just trying to win back what I lost!” Bill cried, trying to reason with his furious brother.
But Jack was beyond reason. “You've been cheating all along, haven't you? You've been playing me for a fool!” Jack spat, his voice filled with anger and frustration.
Bill tried to explain, “I was just trying to make up for my losses, I swear! I never meant to hurt you.”
But Jack wasn't listening. The thought of all his hard work, building his criminal empire from the ground up, being in jeopardy because of his own blood, was too much for him to bear.
“You've betrayed my love and trust. I've built all this for us, and you've thrown it all away!” Jack yelled, his finger tightening on the trigger.
Bill's pleas fell on deaf ears.
I felt the shockwave of the gunshot reverberate through my stones, followed by the sound of Bill's body hitting the ground, and a silence so deep it was palpable. Jack's men, who once laughed and cheered, now huddled in fear. Some even glued themselves on my stony wall, hoping that would make them invisible to the stark raving madness of Jack.
Bill lay motionless on the floor, his blood seeping into the cracks between my stones, staining them red. Jack couldn't believe what he had done. He had taken the life of his own brother, the only person he had ever loved.
As Jack stood there, staring down at Bill's lifeless body, the reality of his actions began to set in. He had let his anger and his love for his brother cloud his judgment, leading him to commit a heinous crime.
Days turned into weeks, and Jack became a recluse within the church. He refused to leave its walls, haunted by the memory of what he had done. The once-flourishing gambling den had become a tomb, a prison for Jack's tortured soul.
His once-proud demeanor had been replaced by a broken shell of a man, consumed by grief and guilt. He would pace the halls, muttering to himself and the walls, “What have I done? Why did I have to be so foolish? I loved him, I really did. I would have done anything to protect him.”
The church became a constant reminder of the sin Jack had committed, a prison that he could never escape from, and, I, a witness to it all.
In his desperation, he frantically searched for a way to break through my defenses. He hurled insults and threats, his anger boiling over like a raging storm. Despite the intense pressure, I stood my ground, facing the full force of his madness head-on.
Eventually, the inevitable happened. Jack's body was discovered, slumped against the stone wall, a gun by his side. The sight was devastating, a testament to the toll that guilt and madness had taken on him. The once vibrant man was now just a shell, a tragic reminder of what can happen when a mind is pushed beyond its limits.
The church was once again abandoned, left to crumble into dust, but the walls still stand, bearing witness to the tale of heartbreak, hope, and sin. And, they whisper to all who will listen, “If walls could talk, they would tell tales of the notorious gambler, Jack, who sought refuge within its walls, believing he could outrun his past. But, alas, he was consumed by it, a reminder that no one can escape the consequences of their actions.
About the Creator
Kahlee
Kahlee has been on a mission since she was a little girl – to bring awareness of social issues through her writing. But don't be fooled by her serious subject – Kahlee knows how to keep things fun and quirky (sometimes).

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