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The Forbidden Door (Conclusion)

Some Secrets Should Stay Locked

By kingkartPublished about a year ago 5 min read
The Forbidden Door (Conclusion)
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Mrs. Cooper stumbled back from the basement door, her breath quickening as the house closed in around her. The once familiar walls seemed foreign now—alive, breathing, filled with a malevolent energy she had never felt before. The shadows in the corners shifted, crawling along the floor, slithering toward her like living things.

The whispers grew louder.

“You should have followed the rule…”

Jenna’s voice, hollow and cold, seemed to come from everywhere at once. Mrs. Cooper’s heart pounded in her chest as the floor beneath her feet creaked ominously. She tried to move, but her legs felt like lead, weighed down by fear and the heavy air pressing against her.

She had followed the house’s rules for so long, had done everything right. Why was this happening now? What had changed?

But deep down, she knew.

She had broken the unspoken pact by opening the door. It didn’t matter that she hadn’t gone down into the basement, hadn’t ventured into the darkness. She had opened the door, and now the house was claiming its due.

The walls seemed to pulse with a strange rhythm, like a heartbeat, growing louder with each passing second. The house had always been a presence, something she could feel but never truly understand. Now, though, it was awake in a way it hadn’t been for years.

A cold gust of wind blew through the hallway, though no windows were open. Mrs. Cooper shivered, clutching her shawl tighter around her shoulders as she backed away from the basement door. But even as she retreated, the house seemed to pull her back, drawing her toward the darkness she had dared to disturb.

“You let me in…” Jenna’s voice echoed again, though it no longer sounded like the girl Mrs. Cooper had met. The sweetness was gone, replaced by something older, colder. “Now you can’t leave.”

A deep sense of dread filled Mrs. Cooper’s chest. She had seen what the house could do to those who didn’t follow its rules—people disappeared, swallowed by the darkness, their souls bound to the house forever. The basement door had always been the boundary, the line between safety and oblivion.

Now, she had crossed it.

She turned, intent on leaving the house, but as she reached the front door, the handle wouldn’t turn. She pulled harder, but it refused to budge. Panic surged through her. She tried the windows, but they, too, were stuck. It was as if the house had locked itself, trapping her inside. She pounded on the walls, her fists trembling with fear.

“I let you stay. You should have listened.”

The voice was louder now, echoing through the halls with a strange authority. It wasn’t Jenna’s anymore. It was the house itself, ancient and unforgiving.

Mrs. Cooper stumbled back toward the parlor, trying to think of a way out. But the house had always been in control. She had only been its caretaker, a temporary keeper of its secrets. And now it wanted her, just as it had wanted Jenna.

From the hallway, the basement door creaked open.

A cold gust of air rushed out, filling the room with the smell of damp earth and decay. Mrs. Cooper froze, her body paralyzed with terror as she watched the shadows spill from the basement like liquid, pooling at her feet. She could hear the scratching again—louder this time, more frantic. It wasn’t just coming from the basement anymore. It was inside the walls, the ceiling, the floors. It surrounded her.

A figure emerged from the basement’s depths, pale and twisted. Jenna—or what was left of her—stood in the doorway, her eyes black, her mouth twisted into a grotesque smile.

“Thank you,” she whispered, her voice no longer pleading but triumphant. “Thank you for letting me out.”

Mrs. Cooper backed away, but there was nowhere to run. The shadows surged forward, enveloping her, pulling her toward the gaping darkness of the basement. The walls groaned, the house itself seemed to shudder with anticipation.

She screamed, but no sound escaped her lips.

The last thing she saw before the darkness consumed her was Jenna’s cold, dead eyes watching her, a satisfied grin spreading across her face.

Epilogue

A week later, the village buzzed with quiet rumors. Mrs. Cooper hadn’t been seen in days, and the once well-kept house at the end of the lane stood eerily silent, its windows dark and its doors tightly shut. People whispered about the strange things they had heard—soft scratching noises, faint cries in the night—but no one dared approach the house.

It wasn’t the first time someone had disappeared there.

A few days later, a young couple looking to move to the countryside stopped by the village. They heard about the Cooper house, now empty and available for sale, and decided to take a look. It was a beautiful property, after all, perfect for their quiet, rural life.

When they arrived, the front door was unlocked, and the house seemed perfectly intact. They stepped inside, admiring the old wooden beams and vintage furnishings. The air smelled faintly of lavender, but underneath it was something else—something damp, like old earth.

The realtor, an older man from the village, smiled as he showed them around, avoiding their questions about the house’s history. “There’s just one thing,” he said as they reached the end of the tour. “The basement—don’t bother with it. Old, damp, and best left alone. Just follow the house’s rule.”

The couple nodded, thinking nothing of it.

Later that night, as they unpacked their belongings in the living room, the scratching started.

At first, it was faint, barely noticeable, like the sound of a mouse scurrying in the walls. But as the hours passed, it grew louder, more persistent.

The wife paused, glancing toward the hallway where the basement door stood at the far end.

“Did you hear that?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

Her husband nodded, frowning. “Probably just the old pipes,” he said, though there was uncertainty in his voice.

And then came the knock.

Soft at first, but deliberate.

The couple exchanged nervous glances.

A voice, faint and pleading, drifted from behind the basement door.

“Help me… I’m trapped… please… let me out…”

The husband’s hand hovered over the knob.

There was only one rule.

The conclusion to the story "The House's Rule." It ends with a new couple moving into the house, unknowingly stepping into the same dangerous cycle that Mrs. Cooper experienced. The eerie final moments, with the scratching and the familiar plea coming from behind the basement door, suggest that the house is still alive and hungry, continuing its haunting pattern with new victims.

The story concludes with a sense of chilling inevitability: no matter who enters the house, the rule will eventually be broken, and the house will claim what it wants.

Part 1: The Forbidden Room

Part 2: The Forbidden Room 2

Horror

About the Creator

kingkart

The best things in life are really expensive. You can have me for $7 billion.

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