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The Eyes of the Rose

A Tale of Loneliness, Memory, and the Voice of Life

By khanPublished 7 months ago 4 min read

The garden was silent except for the whispering rustle of leaves. The sun had nearly dipped beneath the horizon, leaving behind trails of gold and purple in the sky. In the far corner, near a weathered stone bench, stood a single red rose, tall and vibrant among the green, as if untouched by time or season.

A man stood before it — quiet, unmoving, his hands buried deep in his coat pockets. His face bore the wear of time: creased by sorrow, shadowed by solitude, and dulled by the kind of silence that grows roots within the soul.

He had walked into the garden without knowing why. He hadn’t meant to come. His feet had simply carried him here, drawn by an ache he couldn’t name. The garden, once familiar, now seemed foreign — yet something in the air felt like a forgotten lullaby.

And then he saw it — the rose.

Unlike any other flower he had ever seen, this rose seemed... aware. Its petals shimmered as if lit from within, and most strikingly — it had eyes.

Yes, eyes — two soft, luminous orbs nestled where the bloom met the stem, deep crimson like wine, but alive. They blinked once.

The man stepped back, startled. Then he heard it — a voice, low and soft, neither male nor female.

“You’ve been crying without tears,” the rose said.

He looked around, half expecting a trick, a speaker hidden in the trees, a whisper on the wind. But the voice came from no place — it came from the rose itself.

“You’re not real,” he whispered.

“And yet you’re here, speaking to me,” the rose replied gently. “That makes us both real enough.”

There was silence again — but now it was charged with something unseen. The man didn’t walk away. Instead, he sat on the stone bench, facing the rose, as if this conversation had been waiting his whole life.

“Who are you?” he finally asked.

“I am what you see when you stop hiding from your heart,” the rose said. “Call me a rose, if you must. But I’ve seen centuries pass in moments like this. I’ve spoken to those who listened.”

“I don’t think I’ve ever truly listened,” the man said, his voice heavy.

“That’s not true,” the rose said. “You’re listening now. That’s what matters.”

The man lowered his head. A gust of wind moved through the garden, and he felt it press against the cracks in his soul. He closed his eyes.

“I lost someone,” he said. “Years ago. She loved roses. She used to say they spoke to her, too. I laughed at her then. Now... I wish I hadn’t.”

The rose remained silent for a moment. Then, softly, it said, “Her memory lives in you. She loved, and so do you. Even in your sorrow, even in your silence — you love.”

A single tear rolled down his cheek, slow and steady.

“But love didn’t save her,” he whispered.

“Love isn’t a shield,” the rose replied. “It’s a mirror. It shows us who we are, and who we’ve been. Pain doesn't mean the love was wasted — it means it mattered.”

The man looked up, into the rose’s crimson eyes. There was something infinite in them — as if the rose held within it every word ever left unspoken, every goodbye never fully said.

He leaned forward, almost as if to whisper to the petals.

“Why are you speaking to me?”

“Because you were finally quiet enough to hear,” the rose said. “You’ve buried your voice under years of noise, but tonight, you stood still. That’s all it takes.”

The man exhaled slowly, his breath visible in the cool night air. Memories flickered behind his eyes — laughter across a dinner table, the warmth of her hand, the way she’d hum to herself as she watered the plants.

“Will I ever feel whole again?”

“No,” said the rose simply. “But you’ll feel real. Wholeness is a lie. Life is made of pieces — some jagged, some smooth. You carry them all. That is your beauty.”

He laughed, a soft, broken laugh.

“You sound like her,” he said.

“I am her,” said the rose.

The man’s eyes widened.

“Not her body. Not her soul. But the echo of her love, the warmth of her memory — it shaped me. I bloomed from what she left behind in you.”

He reached out, not to pluck, not to possess — just to feel. His fingers hovered above a petal, trembling.

“Can I stay here?”

“You always do,” the rose said. “Every time your heart aches, you return. You just don’t remember.”

He nodded. A strange peace settled in his chest. Not the peace of solutions, but of understanding. The kind that does not demand answers, only presence.

The sky above had turned to ink, scattered with stars. The garden was quiet again, but not empty. Something sacred had passed between them.

He stood up, one last glance at the rose, whose eyes now slowly closed.

“Thank you,” he whispered.

“Live,” said the rose. “Feel everything. And come back when you forget how.”

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