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The Edge of Emptiness

When silence becomes louder than any scream.

By Pir Ashfaq AhmadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read
Cassidy Randall | The Atavist Magazine | May 2025 | 2,041 words (8 minutes)

The Edge of Emptiness

When silence becomes louder than any scream.

The wind howled like a beast outside the cabin. It came in gusts, rattling the windowpanes and clawing at the door, as if the storm wanted to be let in. But inside, it was still. Too still.

Daniel Reeve sat at the edge of an old wooden chair, his fingers wrapped around a mug of cold tea he didn’t remember brewing. The fire had long since died out. Ash curled in the hearth like remnants of a memory. The only sound was the wind—and the steady ticking of the old clock mounted above the mantel, a heartbeat in an otherwise lifeless room.

He used to design things. Cities. Glass towers and skylines. Daniel Reeve, award-winning architect. Married to Eliza, father to Ava. He remembered that life in flashes now—Eliza laughing as she danced barefoot in the kitchen, Ava climbing into his lap with a book too big for her hands.

Then, the fire. The smell of smoke, the scream caught in his throat, and the sound of sirens echoing in a silence that never left.

He’d come here because someone told him silence could be healing.

They were wrong.

This silence was a different kind. It wasn’t peaceful—it was alive. It throbbed behind the walls. It breathed through the cracks in the floor. It whispered in the spaces where laughter used to be.

The cabin sat perched on the edge of a cliff, overlooking a vast, angry sea. Locals had warned him. Don’t go there, they said. That place takes from people already broken. But he came anyway. Because broken people don’t care about warnings.

On the third day, he found the journal.

It was hidden under a loose floorboard in the bedroom—dusty, leather-bound, fragile with age. Curiosity pried it open.

November 3, 1983. It begins with silence. Then come the voices.

Daniel froze.

The entries continued for months. The writer, a man named Edward Bell, had come to the cabin after losing his wife and son in a tragic landslide. His early entries were filled with grief—raw and human. But as the pages went on, things changed.

There’s a boy. He stands near the birch tree at dusk. He doesn’t speak, only watches. The sea chants her name when the wind picks up. I am not alone here—not really.

Daniel stopped reading that night.

But the cabin had other plans.

That evening, as he tried to sleep, he heard the sound of small footsteps running across the wooden floor. Not heavy. Not adult. A child’s.

He leapt up, heart pounding.

No one was there.

The next day, he walked to the cliff’s edge. The wind was stronger here, howling like it had something to say. The sea churned violently below, smashing against the rocks with blind rage.

He stood there for a long time.

And then, softly—so softly it could’ve been the wind—he heard a voice.

“Daddy?”

He spun around. No one.

He knew the rational explanation. Grief could mimic ghosts. The mind, desperate for relief, creates what it cannot accept is gone.

But grief didn’t explain the damp footprint that appeared near the fireplace the next morning.

Or the lullaby that hummed through the trees at dusk.

He continued reading the journal.

The edge calls to me. Not to end things. But to remind me how close we live to the line. One wrong breath, and we fall. One moment of courage, and we step back.

The boy is not my son. But he carries my sorrow.

Daniel understood that now.

He wasn’t here to die.

He was here to remember.

To feel something again—even if it was pain.

He spent the next days writing in the margins of Edward’s journal. Not correcting it. Just... continuing it.

He wrote about Eliza’s laugh. The way Ava always asked for one more bedtime story. He wrote about the fire—not the flames, but the moment after, when the silence first crawled into his soul and made a home there.

And then, something changed.

The wind stopped clawing. The nights became less haunted. The silence remained, but it softened. It no longer screamed. It listened.

One morning, as the sun tried to rise through the fog, Daniel walked to the cliff again. The sea was calmer now. The wind cool and steady.

He stood at the edge, toes curled over damp moss, breathing slowly.

“Thank you,” he whispered to the sky, the sea, the ghosts.

He didn’t hear a reply.

He didn’t need to.

He walked back inside. Placed the journal gently beneath the floorboards where he found it. Packed his bag.

As he stepped outside, the wind gave one final tug at his coat, like a child clinging to a parent before letting go.

And Daniel smiled.

For the first time in a long time, he felt empty—but in the right way. Not hollow.

Cleared.

Ready to be filled again.

Psychological

About the Creator

Pir Ashfaq Ahmad

Writer | Storyteller | Dreamer

In short, Emily Carter has rediscovered herself, through life's struggles, loss, and becoming.

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