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The Echoing Dream

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By Loveness MongwePublished about a year ago 4 min read
 The Echoing Dream
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Lena had always been a dreamer, her nights filled with fantastical landscapes and vivid adventures. But for the past month, her dreams had turned into a recurring nightmare—a shadowy labyrinth that seemed to grow more intricate and menacing with each visit.

It always started the same way: Lena would find herself in a vast, dark forest, the trees whispering secrets she couldn’t quite grasp. The air was thick with an eerie fog that twisted around her like fingers. She would wander through the forest, her footsteps muffled by the soft earth, until she came upon a grand, dilapidated mansion hidden deep within the gloom.

The mansion was always the same—a sprawling, Victorian structure with crumbling walls and broken windows, draped in vines and shadow. Inside, the air was colder, and the silence was oppressive, broken only by the occasional creak of the floorboards.

Every night, Lena would explore the mansion, searching for something she couldn’t name. She would move from room to room, each more foreboding than the last, until she reached the final door at the end of a long, dark hallway. The door was always slightly ajar, revealing a sliver of light that seemed both inviting and ominous.

As she approached, Lena would feel a rising sense of dread. The door creaked open of its own accord, and she would step into the room, only to find it empty except for a large, ornate mirror standing against the far wall. The mirror’s surface was covered in dust, and Lena would always see her reflection—pale, wide-eyed, and trembling.

But tonight was different. As Lena reached the mirror, her reflection began to change. Her image morphed into a shadowy figure that seemed to reach out from the glass. Lena’s heart pounded as the figure’s face came into focus—it was her own, but twisted, with hollow eyes and a malevolent grin. The reflection raised a hand, and Lena felt an icy grip on her shoulder.

She jolted awake, gasping for breath, her room bathed in the pale light of dawn. The nightmare was always the same, but tonight it felt more real, as if the shadowy figure had followed her out of the dream.

Lena couldn’t shake the feeling of dread as she went about her day. She tried to distract herself with work, but the memory of the nightmare clung to her. When she returned home, she noticed something strange—a faint, almost imperceptible scratch mark on the mirror in her bedroom.

The scratch was new, and Lena could have sworn it hadn’t been there before. She dismissed it as a coincidence and tried to ignore the growing sense of unease. That night, however, as she lay in bed, she could hardly close her eyes without being haunted by the nightmare.

The days passed, and the nightmares grew more intense. Lena found herself obsessively researching the mansion from her dreams, but nothing about it seemed to exist in reality. The more she searched, the more she felt a connection between the nightmare and her waking life.

One evening, Lena’s curiosity got the better of her. Driven by a sense of urgency, she found herself at an old, forgotten part of town she had never noticed before. There, hidden behind overgrown foliage, was an old Victorian mansion—the very one from her dreams.

Her heart raced as she approached the front door, which creaked open at her touch. Inside, the mansion was just as she had dreamed—dilapidated and eerie, with a sense of foreboding that seemed almost tangible. Lena wandered through the rooms, her footsteps echoing in the silence, until she reached the familiar hallway and the final door.

With trembling hands, she pushed open the door and entered the room with the mirror. Her reflection stared back at her, and she could see the same twisted figure she had seen in her nightmares. But this time, the figure’s grin seemed less malevolent and more sorrowful.

As Lena stared into the mirror, she heard a voice, soft and mournful. “Help me,” it whispered. Lena realized that the shadowy figure was not an evil presence but a lost soul trapped within the mirror. The figure’s eyes were filled with a deep, aching sadness.

Determined to free the trapped spirit, Lena searched the room for anything that might help. She found an old journal hidden beneath the floorboards, its pages filled with the ramblings of a once-wealthy owner who had been tormented by an unfulfilled promise and had sealed himself in the mirror’s reflection.

With a sense of resolve, Lena read aloud the last entry from the journal, a heartfelt plea for release. As she spoke the words, the mirror’s surface began to shimmer, and the shadowy figure reached out one last time before vanishing into the light.

The mansion seemed to sigh in relief as Lena left, the oppressive atmosphere lifting. The nightmares ceased, and the mirror in her bedroom, now clear and unblemished, seemed to reflect a sense of peace.

Lena had faced her fears and helped a lost soul find its way. The mansion and its haunting memories faded from her dreams, leaving her with a profound sense of closure and the knowledge that even the darkest nightmares can sometimes be overcome with courage and compassion.

End.

Horror

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Loveness Mongwe

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Well written

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