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The Echo of Silence

Navigating the Quiet After the Storm: Embracing the Silence in the Wake of a Breakup

By Subhasri DevarajPublished about a year ago 3 min read

You knew it was coming long before the words were spoken. There was a quiet, creeping stillness in the house that had grown louder with every passing day. The conversations had become brief, clipped—just enough to get by without really saying anything. The space between you, once filled with laughter and shared secrets, had stretched and stretched until it felt like you were living on opposite sides of an invisible chasm.

It wasn’t one thing. It never is. It was the accumulation of a thousand small fractures, each one too minor to notice until, all at once, they formed a deep crack that ran through the middle of your life together.

You tried to ignore it, pretended that if you didn’t acknowledge the distance, it might close on its own. You filled the silence with the noise of everyday life—TV shows you didn’t really watch, phone calls to friends that never went past the surface, nights out that were more about avoiding the inevitable than enjoying each other’s company.

But in the quiet moments, when it was just the two of you, the truth was undeniable. You were both holding on to something that was slipping through your fingers, trying to catch water in a sieve.

Then came the day it all unraveled. It wasn’t dramatic. No shouting, no throwing things, no storming out. Just a quiet, resigned conversation over the kitchen table, where you’d shared so many meals and dreams. The words came slowly, heavily, each one a nail in the coffin of what you once were.

“We’re not happy, are we?”

The question hung in the air, an accusation and a confession all at once. You stared at the table, tracing the grain of the wood with your finger, searching for something to say that would make it all untrue.

But there was nothing. Because it was true. You weren’t happy. Neither of you had been for a long time.

“I don’t know how to fix this,” you finally whispered.

“I don’t think we can,” came the reply, soft and certain.

And just like that, it was over. No grand gestures, no last-ditch efforts to save what was already gone. Just a mutual acknowledgment that the love you had shared, the love that had once been everything, was no longer enough.

The days that followed were a blur of logistics and practicalities—dividing up belongings, deciding who would stay and who would go, canceling plans for a future that no longer existed. You moved through it all like a ghost, there but not really present, your mind caught in an endless loop of what-ifs and if-onlys.

You thought about the early days, when everything was new and exciting and full of possibility. When you couldn’t wait to see each other, when even the most mundane tasks were fun because you were doing them together. You tried to remember the last time you’d felt that way, but the memory was hazy, like trying to see through fog.

The house was quiet now, quieter than it had ever been. You’d thought the silence before was bad, but this was something else. This was the silence of absence, of loss. You’d shared this space, filled it with your lives, and now it was just you, alone with your thoughts.

You sat on the couch, staring at the empty spot beside you, half-expecting to hear the sound of keys in the door, a familiar voice calling out. But there was nothing. Just the steady tick of the clock on the wall, marking the time as it passed, indifferent to your pain.

You tried to distract yourself, to push the thoughts away, but they always came back, relentless and unyielding. The memories of what was, the regrets of what could have been, the aching emptiness of what never would be.

And yet, in the midst of it all, there was a strange kind of relief. The uncertainty, the tension, the constant effort to hold something together that was already broken—it was all gone. In its place was a clear, painful truth: it was over. And with that truth came the smallest glimmer of hope, the faintest whisper of a future where you might find yourself again.

But for now, you sat in the silence, letting it wash over you, feeling its weight. This was your new reality. It was hard, and it was lonely, and it hurt in ways you couldn’t yet fully understand.

But it was also the beginning of something new. You didn’t know what that something was yet, and you were too tired to think about it right now. So you let the silence be. You let yourself feel the loss, the grief, the emptiness.

Because you knew that, somehow, someday, you would fill that space again. You would heal, you would move forward, and you would find a new path. But for now, you just let the silence be.

Love

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Subhasri Devaraj

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent piece

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