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The Echo in the Attic

Sometimes the quietest spaces hold the loudest truths.

By Saboor Brohi Published 7 months ago 3 min read
A forgotten journal reveals a father's hidden love in the quiet attic where memories echo.

The Echo in the Attic

No one had stepped into the attic for thirteen years.

It wasn’t that it was locked. It wasn’t haunted either—at least not in the way ghosts wear bedsheets and slam doors. It was just forgotten. Left behind. Like an old photograph with no one left alive to name the faces.

But today, Elise turned the brass doorknob with a firm twist.

The stairs groaned under her feet. A scent greeted her, thick with dust and time—like dried flowers and memories sealed in forgotten trunks. She pulled the chain to the single dangling bulb, its flickering light shivering shadows across stacked boxes and old furniture draped like ghosts in canvas sheets.

She didn’t come looking for anything. That’s the thing about real healing—it doesn’t start with a destination. It begins with a whisper: go back.

She was thirty now, far from the teenager who used to sneak up here to cry or draw when the world downstairs was too loud. Her father had died last month, and the house—now hers—felt too hollow. Too final. Every room echoed with the absence of arguments and apologies.

Then she saw it.

A red leather journal. Sitting alone atop a crate labeled “WINTER CLOTHES.” It hadn’t aged like the rest of the room. The leather still glowed faintly under the bulb, as if someone had opened it recently.

She brushed off the dust. It was hers.

But inside, the handwriting wasn’t.

“To Elise—

If you're reading this, then I've already left this world, or you finally remembered this place. Either way, this is my truth—hidden in your sanctuary.”

It was her father’s handwriting. But not the stern, all-caps scrawl he used for grocery lists and Post-it reminders. This was careful. Gentle. Each loop of the “e” looked like it took a breath before being born.

She turned the page.

“I never knew how to tell you that I was proud. Not because you weren’t extraordinary—you were. Are. But because I didn’t know how to love loudly. My father taught me silence, and I passed it down like a broken heirloom. I wish I’d been brave enough to say this out loud when it mattered.”

Elise’s breath caught.

The attic stopped creaking.

The whole house leaned in.

“You always asked why I never came to your art shows. I said I was busy. Truth is, I was scared to see your soul hung on a wall, vulnerable and glowing. I was afraid I’d cry in front of strangers.”

Tears slipped silently down her cheeks now.

This wasn’t a confession.

This was a rescue.

“The attic was always your cathedral. I’d listen from the hallway when you played music or sketched the corners of the world you wanted to live in. You were building something I couldn’t enter, but I could hear it breathing. You made magic up here.”

She sat on a dusty trunk, clutching the journal to her chest like it might vanish.

All her life, she believed her father was distant, indifferent—a man too busy counting hours to notice hearts. But he had noticed. He just didn’t have the language.

She flipped to the last page.

“This house will be quiet now. But your attic, your echo, your fire—it lives on. I hope one day you fill this room with music again. Or words. Or maybe even your own child’s laughter.

Love,

Dad.”

She didn’t realize she was smiling through the tears.

That’s the thing about echoes. They return when we least expect them, in places we forgot we filled with ourselves. They remind us that not all silence is empty.

Some silence is waiting.

End

AdventurefamilyFan FictionHistoricalShort StoryLove

About the Creator

Saboor Brohi

I am a Web Contant writter, and Guest Posting providing in different sites like techbullion.com, londondaily.news, and Aijourn.com. I have Personal Author Sites did you need any site feel free to contact me on whatsapp:

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