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The Echo Collector

Some houses replay memories. This one devours them.

By HashirPublished 2 months ago 3 min read

Every night at exactly 3:11 A.M., the house spoke.

At first, Mara convinced herself it was just the building settling—an old colonial home with old colonial problems: rattling pipes, warping wood, air slipping through ancient vents like sighs from a sleeping beast. She was new to living alone, new to living anywhere quiet enough for her own heartbeat to sound like an intruder. So when she heard the first whisper one night in early November, she didn’t panic.

She froze, listened, then laughed nervously to herself.

“Old houses make noises,” she said aloud, as if the house needed reassurance.

It was only when her own voice repeated back to her—soft, delayed, and slightly distorted—that panic unfurled in her chest.

“Old houses make noises… noises… noises…”

She stood very still. The whisper seemed to come from the hallway—no, deeper, from behind the walls themselves. She chalked it up to fatigue, too much caffeine, not enough sleep. She had been working late hours, and sometimes exhaustion made imagination feel heavier than fact.

But the next night at 3:11 A.M., the echo returned.

And the night after that.

And every night afterward… growing a little clearer.

After a week, the echo no longer sounded like an echo at all.

“Who’s there?” she whispered one night, gripping her phone tight even though she didn’t dare turn on the flashlight.

Her words bounced back at her, warped like they were pushed through water.

“Who’s there… there… there…”

And then, after the final echo faded, a voice answered—new, separate, wrong.

“I am.”

Mara felt the cold reach her bones. The voice was not hers. The timbre was deeper, rougher, dragging like gravel poured through a speaker. Her hallway stayed dark, but she could feel the presence behind that voice, as tangible as breath on her neck.

She backed toward her bedroom and shut the door quietly, as if loudness might provoke whatever lived inside the walls.

But the voice seeped through anyway.

“You left the window open, Mara,” it said with amusement. “Cold gets in. So do other things.”

Her mind raced—she had not spoken those words. In fact, she had thought them hours earlier while closing the drafty bathroom window.

The house wasn’t just echoing now.

It was remembering.

Over the next nights, the voice repeated private moments back to her. Conversations she had whispered to herself years earlier. Regrets she had told no one. Secrets she had buried so deeply she barely recognized them when the house replayed them, delighted, as if savoring every syllable.

It began twisting the memories too.

“You didn’t mean what you said at your mother’s funeral,” it crooned.

“You lied to your sister. Lied to your boyfriend.”

“You lie even to yourself.”

Mara stopped speaking aloud altogether. Silence became her only defense.

On the seventh night, the voice said nothing. The silence was louder than the whispering had ever been.

She lay awake until her skin prickled and her throat tightened with dread. The house was waiting.

Finally, unable to bear it, she stepped into the hallway. Darkness pooled heavily along the floorboards. As her eyes adjusted, she saw it: the wallpaper bulging outward in one long, pulsing swell, as though something pressed from inside the walls, desperate to get out.

A whisper slid across her ear, so close she felt the wind of it.

“I have everything you ever said. Now I want what you haven’t.”

The bulge in the wallpaper shivered… and split open.

Something stepped out.

It had her height, her outline, her posture—but no substance. Just a hollow silhouette stitched together from shadows and flickering sound waves, its edges rippling like static. Every shuddering breath it exhaled sounded like her own voice trying—and failing—to scream.

Mara stumbled backward, shaking. “Don’t take my voice,” she begged.

The creature tilted its head in a jagged, unnatural motion, like it was mimicking how humans move but didn’t quite understand.

“I don’t want your voice,” it rasped.

Its hollow chest inhaled, drawing the air from the hallway with a violent pull.

“I want your silence. Forever.”

The breath it drew in was not just air.

It pulled her final scream, her final plea, her final heartbeat—swallowing them like a feast.

When the sun rose the next morning, the hall stood still and empty, the wallpaper smooth and unbroken. The house no longer whispered.

It waited.

And if you enter Mara’s home at 3:11 A.M., the walls will tremble with a new echo—breathy, fragile, freshly taken.

A voice trying to warn you.

A voice that used to belong to Mara.

A voice that now belongs to the house.

And if you listen too long…

The house will start collecting yours.

Horror

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