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The Day Time Stopped in Oblivion Ridge

When the Clocks Froze, So Did Our Reality

By Joe WalterPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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Oblivion Ridge wasn’t much to talk about. A sleepy town nestled in a valley, surrounded by jagged cliffs and endless pine trees. It was the kind of place where everyone knew everyone, and the biggest scandal in years was when old Mrs. Carmichael painted her front door neon pink.

That was before the clocks stopped.

I remember it like it was yesterday, but the truth is, no one knows how long it’s been. Time doesn’t work here anymore.

It all started at exactly 11:47 a.m. on a Tuesday. I was in Mr. Finch’s Diner, halfway through a slice of apple pie, when the first hand of the wall clock gave a soft click and froze. I thought it was a glitch.

“Hey, Finch,” I called, gesturing to the clock. “Your trusty old clock needs batteries!”

He barely glanced up from his crossword. “It’s electric,” he grunted.

That’s when I noticed my phone screen. The time was stuck at 11:47. The waitress, Sandy, pulled out her phone too. Same thing.

“It’s probably just some weird bug,” I said, brushing it off.

But when I stepped outside, the air felt... wrong. It was bright as noon, but the sun didn’t move. Shadows from the lampposts stayed the same. The usual rustling of leaves in the breeze was gone, like someone hit the mute button on the whole town.

“Anyone else noticing something weird?” Sheriff Daniels’ voice came from his patrol car. A few folks gathered by the town square, staring up at the clock tower. It had stopped too.

Time wasn’t just frozen; it was stuck.

The Things We Saw

At first, people thought it was kind of cool. No deadlines. No alarm clocks. No rush. The Ridge became one big lazy picnic. Kids played in the streets, the bakery gave out free donuts, and people lingered in conversations as if there was all the time in the world.

But the novelty wore off fast.

You see, the weird part wasn’t just the clocks. Things stopped growing. Mrs. Carmichael’s roses wilted and never came back. Ice didn’t melt. Fires didn’t burn. Even the coffee in Finch’s pot stayed hot but never bubbled over. It was like the world hit pause on everything except us.

And then came the dreams.

It started with whispers in the night, voices none of us recognized. “You don’t belong here,” one voice said. “Fix what’s broken,” another murmured. When we woke up, the clocks were still frozen, but the messages grew clearer every night.

Fix what, though?

The Truth About Oblivion Ridge

By now, the whole town was on edge. Everyone had theories. Sandy swore it was aliens. Mr. Finch said it was government experiments gone wrong. Mrs. Carmichael declared it was God’s punishment for her pink door (which, to be fair, was a crime against taste).

It was Jonah, the quiet guy who lived by the cliffs, who figured it out.

“The old church bell,” he said one evening, standing in the middle of the square. “Ever wonder why it hasn’t rung in years?”

Turns out, the church bell had cracked decades ago. Local lore said it was cursed—that ringing it would summon something worse than death. But Jonah, the history buff, believed the opposite.

“What if the bell is meant to protect us?” he said.

The townsfolk thought he was crazy, but we were desperate. So, late that night, we huddled in the abandoned church. The bell hung crooked, rusted, and silent as the grave. Jonah climbed the ladder, gripping a mallet.

“If this goes wrong, I’m blaming you,” Finch muttered.

Jonah swung. The mallet struck metal with a deafening clang. For a moment, nothing happened.

Then, the ground trembled.

The Reset

The sun moved. Shadows stretched. A sudden rush of wind swept through the valley, stirring leaves and sending dust into the air. The clocks ticked back to life, all of them racing forward to catch up.

And then the whispers returned, but this time, they felt... lighter.

“You did it,” they said.

We stood outside the church, watching the sunrise as if it were the first time. The air smelled fresher, the colors brighter.

“Do you think it’s over?” Sandy asked, breaking the silence.

“Maybe,” Jonah said, staring at the horizon. “Or maybe it’s just the beginning.”

The Ridge went back to normal after that—mostly. But if you ever visit, don’t be surprised if someone tells you to listen closely at night. You might still hear whispers on the wind, thanking us for bringing time back to Oblivion Ridge.

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About the Creator

Joe Walter

From writer during childhood to artist as I've aged.

I'm passionate about using both in my storytelling.

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