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The Day the Sun Crowned the Third Pyramid

It looks so beautiful.

By Marie381Uk Published 7 days ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2026

The Day the Sun Crowned the Third Pyramid

The desert was still, the kind of still that pressed against the ears and made every heartbeat loud. I had arrived hours before dawn, walking over sand that had carried footsteps older than memory. The pyramids loomed, dark and patient, watching the night fold into itself.

Then the horizon began to stir. First a pale line, then a glow, and at last the sun itself lifted slowly, perfectly aligned with the tip of the third pyramid. Around it bloomed a halo of fire, a ring so pure it seemed impossible, a circle drawn by some unseen hand. I froze, and the world froze with me.

For a moment, there was no time. No centuries of kings or slaves, no tourists with their cameras, no voices — only the light, the sand, and the pyramids, breathing together under a sky that seemed to hold its breath. I felt small, impossibly small, and yet connected to everything that had ever been.

The halo shimmered, shifting as the sun climbed, and I understood something I could not name. History was not just in books or tombs — it was here, in a perfect alignment, in the way light could touch stone and turn it sacred.

I stayed until the circle faded, until the sun rose high enough to claim the sky as ordinary once more. But the memory remained, burning quietly in my chest, a reminder that some mornings are too extraordinary to ever forget.

I left the desert with sand in my shoes and awe in my veins, knowing I had witnessed a rare moment the world might never see again, and yet I would carry it forever. Please show your support if you liked my short story. Like and comment❤️ please.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham5 days ago

    This is quite inspirational, and I felt the quiet and the heat of the sun.

  • Seema Patel6 days ago

    Have you visited a desert?

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