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The Day My Reflection Talked Back

A lonely character notices their reflection giving advice they didn’t want to hear.

By Rashid khanPublished 4 months ago 4 min read

The Day My Reflection Talked Back

The bathroom mirror was fogged from the shower, yet I lingered in front of it, tracing meaningless circles in the condensation. I wasn’t really looking at myself—just at the blurred outline of someone who looked like me, someone who had lately felt like a stranger.

It had been one of those weeks when the silence of my apartment felt heavier than usual. My phone barely buzzed anymore, and when it did, it was usually some promotion or reminder I didn’t need. Friends had drifted off into marriages, jobs, or distant cities, while I stayed here, waiting for… something.

I leaned closer to the mirror and whispered, almost jokingly, “What are you staring at?”

And then, the impossible happened.

The reflection blinked, leaned forward with perfect synchronization, and said, “At you. And honestly, I’m getting tired of the sulking.”

I froze, breath caught in my throat. My reflection’s lips had moved, but not in perfect unison. The voice—my voice, but firmer, sharper—had echoed in the bathroom like a reprimand.

“This isn’t funny,” I muttered, half expecting I’d finally cracked under loneliness.

“Funny?” my reflection scoffed. “You call drowning in self-pity funny? You’ve been avoiding calls, dodging responsibilities, and pretending you’re fine. You’re not fine.”

I stumbled backward, hitting the sink. “You’re not real.”

“Neither is the version of life you’re pretending to live,” the reflection shot back. “I’m only saying what you won’t admit.”

My skin prickled. I wanted to run, but my legs felt glued to the cold tile floor. The reflection’s eyes—my own brown eyes—were too sharp, too knowing.

“Why now?” I whispered.

“Because you’ve ignored me for too long,” it said, softening slightly. “You stare into this mirror every day but never see. You avoid the truth, and I’ve had enough.”

I shook my head. “I don’t need advice from a mirror.”

“Too bad,” it said. “You’re going to hear it anyway.”

The reflection straightened, shoulders squared with confidence I hadn’t felt in years. “You’re lonely because you push people away. You tell yourself they’ve left, but half the time you don’t answer when they reach out. You claim you want change but won’t take a single step toward it. You settle for quiet misery and call it survival.”

My throat tightened. “You don’t understand. It’s not that simple.”

“Of course it’s not simple. But hiding in silence isn’t making it easier. Be honest—when was the last time you said yes to anything?”

I searched my memory and came up empty.

“I thought so,” the reflection said. “You’d rather sit here talking to me than risk rejection or disappointment.”

Anger sparked in me, a defense against the sting of truth. “What do you want me to do? Just pretend everything’s fine? Force myself into conversations I don’t want?”

“No,” the reflection replied evenly. “I want you to stop pretending you’re okay being alone all the time. You’re human. You crave connection. Stop punishing yourself for needing it.”

The silence stretched, heavy with words I couldn’t say. My reflection waited, patient but unrelenting.

Finally, I asked, “And what if I fail? What if I reach out and no one answers?”

“Then at least you tried,” it said. “Failure is better than stagnation. Loneliness won’t vanish overnight, but neither will courage unless you use it.”

I stared into those too-honest eyes, my chest aching. Deep down, I knew it was right. I had hidden behind excuses for too long, convinced myself that no one cared when really, I hadn’t given anyone the chance.

But still, I whispered, “I’m scared.”

“I know,” the reflection said gently, and for the first time, its tone felt like comfort rather than accusation. “But courage isn’t the absence of fear—it’s moving despite it. Call someone. Say yes. Show up. Let them know you exist outside of this mirror.”

I blinked, and for a moment the reflection moved with me again, syncing perfectly as though the spell was breaking.

“Will you disappear if I listen?” I asked.

The reflection smiled faintly. “I was never separate from you. I’m just the voice you’ve been silencing. Let me in, and you won’t need me to talk back anymore.”

And then, as quickly as it had begun, the reflection returned to mimicry, copying every motion I made. The bathroom was quiet again, save for the dripping faucet.

I stood there, staring at myself—truly looking this time. My face was tired, yes, but not hopeless. My eyes still held a spark I hadn’t noticed in months.

I picked up my phone from the counter, thumb hovering over the screen. For a moment I hesitated, but then I opened my contacts and tapped a name I hadn’t dialed in years.

When the ringing tone filled the room, I caught my reflection’s faint smile in the corner of my eye.

For the first time in a long time, I smiled back.

Fan FictionFantasyMysteryPsychologicalShort StoryYoung Adult

About the Creator

Rashid khan

Writer of stories where reality meets the unknown.

I turn ordinary moments into haunting, unforgettable tales.

Here to leave you with words that echo long after reading.

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