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The Cursed Spire

Mara

By UmmiPublished about a year ago 5 min read

They warned me not to enter the Spire, but when your sister’s life hangs in the balance, warnings hold little weight.

The forest whispered its disapproval as I slipped through its shadowed boughs, a dagger strapped to my side and a satchel of half-baked courage slung over my shoulder. Moonlight filtered through the skeletal branches, casting fractured patterns on the moss-covered ground. Ahead, the Spire loomed, a jagged monument of obsidian stone piercing the heavens.

The stories painted it as a place of death, its walls steeped in curses and madness. Yet here I was, feet crunching over brittle twigs, heart pounding in defiance of every tale I’d heard at the hearth as a child.

“Velanie,” I whispered, the name like a charm on my lips. “I’m coming.”

The Spire’s blackened doorway yawned open before me, a void that seemed to swallow the faint moonlight. The air was colder here, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something metallic, blood, maybe. I clenched my hands into fists, the leather of my gloves creaking softly.

“Turn back,” the wind seemed to hiss, threading through the trees like a specter.

I ignored it and stepped inside.

The moment I crossed the threshold, the world shifted. The chill of the forest was replaced by oppressive heat, and the soft whisper of leaves gave way to an unearthly hum. The Spire’s interior was larger than it had any right to be, its walls stretching upward into infinite darkness. The stone beneath my boots was smooth, unnervingly warm, and pulsed faintly, as though the Spire itself were alive.

“Velanie!” I called again, my voice echoing off the cavernous walls.

No reply.

Instead, a shadow peeled itself from the corner of the room.

It wasn’t human, not fully. Its form was fluid, shifting between a humanoid silhouette and something serpentine. Eyes like molten gold pierced the gloom, locking onto me. I reached for my dagger, but the creature’s voice slithered into my mind before I could draw it.

“Little thief,” it purred, the words laced with amusement. “What brings you to my domain?”

“I’m not a thief,” I said, forcing steel into my voice. “I’ve come for my sister.”

The creature tilted its head, the movement unsettlingly smooth. “Ah, yes. The child with hair like spun copper. She cried beautifully.”

My grip on the dagger tightened, rage blooming in my chest. “Where is she?”

“Safe,” it said, circling me. Its footsteps or whatever passed for them made no sound. “For now.”

“What do you want?” I asked, eyes tracking its every movement.

The creature stopped, its form solidifying into something almost human. Almost. “A trade,” it said, baring sharp teeth in what might have been a smile.

I clenched my jaw. “What kind of trade?”

“Your memories,” it said simply. “A single year’s worth, plucked clean from your mind.”

I faltered. Memories were currency in places like this, more valuable than gold. Without them, you lost more than moments you lost pieces of yourself.

“No,” I said, my voice firm. “There must be another way.”

The creature laughed, a sound like shattering glass. “Bold of you to bargain, thief. Very well. A trial, then. Survive, and the child is yours.”

The air around me thickened, and the room dissolved in a swirl of shadows and fire. When the world settled, I found myself standing in a vast, desolate wasteland. The ground was cracked and arid, the sky above a roiling mass of storm clouds.

“What is this?” I demanded, but the creature’s voice was gone.

The ground trembled beneath me.

I turned just as something massive burst from the earth. A beast of stone and fire rose before me, its molten core glowing through the cracks in its jagged hide. It roared, the sound like a thousand boulders grinding together, and charged.

Instinct took over. I dove to the side, the beast’s claws tearing into the ground where I’d stood moments before. Rolling to my feet, I unsheathed the dagger. Its blade was enchanted a gift from my father but against a creature like this, it felt pitifully inadequate.

The beast lunged again, and I barely managed to evade its swipe. My mind raced, searching for a weakness. The molten core, it had to be the core.

As the beast circled me, I spotted a jagged outcrop of stone nearby. An idea began to form, reckless and desperate.

The beast charged, and this time, I ran toward it. At the last second, I dropped into a slide, the heat of its core singeing my skin as I passed beneath it. Rolling to my feet, I sprinted for the outcrop, the beast hot on my heels.

I reached the stones and scaled them quickly, the beast roaring in frustration below. As it reared back for another attack, I leapt, dagger poised.

The blade struck true, sinking into the glowing fissure at its center. The beast let out a deafening roar, its body convulsing violently. I clung to the dagger, the heat unbearable, as the creature collapsed beneath me, shattering into lifeless rubble.

The wasteland dissolved, and I found myself back in the Spire’s cavernous room. The creature stood before me once more, its molten eyes gleaming with something akin to respect.

“Well done, thief,” it said, inclining its head.

“Where is she?” I demanded, chest heaving.

The creature stepped aside, and there she was, Velanie, crumpled on the floor, her copper hair tangled and dull.

“Velanie!” I dropped to my knees beside her, shaking her gently. Her eyes fluttered open, and relief flooded through me.

“Mara?” she murmured, her voice weak.

“I’m here,” I said, pulling her into a tight embrace.

“Touching,” the creature said, its voice dripping with mockery. “But our deal isn’t complete.”

I glared at it. “I passed your trial.”

“And I will uphold my end of the bargain,” it said, grinning. “But nothing is free, little thief.”

The ground beneath us trembled, and the creature dissolved into shadow, its laughter echoing in the air. The Spire began to collapse, the walls crumbling like brittle sandcastles.

Clutching Velanie, I sprinted for the exit, dodging falling debris and leaping over jagged cracks. The doorway was just ahead, golden light spilling through it.

With one final burst of strength, I dove through the opening, landing hard on the forest floor. Behind me, the Spire collapsed in on itself, a cloud of dust and shadow rising into the night sky.

Velanie stirred in my arms, and I looked down at her, my heart swelling with relief.

“Are you okay?” I asked.

She nodded weakly, her eyes wide with fear and wonder.

As I helped her to her feet, a thought nagged at the back of my mind, a faint, uneasy whisper. The Spire had fallen, but its presence lingered, a dark thread woven into the fabric of the forest.

I glanced over my shoulder, half-expecting to see those molten eyes watching me from the shadows.

“Let’s go,” I said, taking Velanie’s hand.

The forest was silent as we walked, the trees still and watchful. And though the Spire was gone, I knew its curse was far from broken.

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Ummi

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  • Karan w. about a year ago

    This is a wonderful story! I really liked this ✨

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