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The Cruel Maid

"The Dark Side of Perfectionism"

By AbbasPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
The Cruel Maid
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Asma had always been proud of her beautiful home and her ability to keep it spotless. She had been a maid for many years and took great joy in her work. She would spend hours every day ensuring that every surface was dust-free, every floor was sparkling clean, and every item was in its perfect place.

At first, her employers had appreciated her dedication and attention to detail. They would often praise her and thank her for her hard work. But over time, Asma's obsession with cleanliness and order began to consume her. She became cruel and abusive, finding fault in everything her employers did and criticizing them constantly.

If they left a dish in the sink, she would scold them for being lazy. If they forgot to make their bed, she would lecture them on the importance of discipline. She would even go through their personal belongings, rearranging their clothes and possessions to suit her own sense of order.

Her employers tried to be patient with her, but Asma's cruelty soon became too much to bear. They would come home from work to find her yelling at them, her face red with anger, her eyes blazing with a fierce intensity. They began to feel like they were walking on eggshells, never knowing when Asma would lash out at them next.

Despite their best efforts to avoid her wrath, Asma's employers couldn't seem to do anything right in her eyes. She would criticize their cooking, their cleaning, even their breathing. She became a constant presence in their lives, always finding fault, always criticizing.

One day, Asma's employers had had enough. They called her into the living room and told her that her services were no longer needed. Asma was shocked and outraged, but deep down, she knew that she had brought it on herself.

As she packed her bags and left the house, Asma realized that her cruelty had cost her the one thing she loved most - her job. She was left alone, with no one to boss around or clean up after. She had no one to blame but herself.

In the days and weeks that followed, Asma's anger and bitterness slowly gave way to regret and sadness. She realized that her obsession with cleanliness and order had consumed her, and that she had lost sight of what was truly important.

Asma's story serves as a reminder that kindness and compassion are just as important as cleanliness and order. Her cruelty had destroyed her relationships and left her alone, a fate worse than any mess or disorder.

Asma began to see a therapist to work through her issues, and slowly but surely, she started to rebuild her life. She learned to control her obsession with cleanliness and order, and she started to focus on building meaningful relationships with others.

She eventually found a new job as a maid, but this time, she made sure to treat her employers with kindness and respect. She learned that a clean house was not more important than a happy home, and she was grateful for a second chance.

Asma's story spread like wildfire, and soon, she was known as the maid who had learned a valuable lesson. She became a symbol of redemption and second chances, and her story inspired many to reevaluate their priorities.

In the end, Asma's cruelty had been a blessing in disguise. It had taught her a valuable lesson, and it had given her a second chance at life. She was grateful for the experience, and she knew that she would never forget the lessons she had learned.

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About the Creator

Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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