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THE CROWNLESS KING

A young heir abandons his crown to discover the five pillars of inner power: identity, regulation, presence, worth, and action without validation. A journey of self-mastery, courage, and awakening.

By Luis Carlos Daza rios Published 2 months ago 5 min read

“This story was created with the assistance of AI tools.”

THE CROWNLESS KING

CHAPTER 1 – THE DAY HE REMOVED THE CROWN

Aren was the heir to the throne.

The kingdom expected him to walk with his golden crown—tall, bright, unquestionable.

But at dawn one day, Aren woke up, looked at himself in the mirror and whispered:

“I don’t know who I am… if I depend on this crown to feel worthy.”

He took it off.

Placed it gently on the royal cushion.

And walked out into the village with no title, no symbol, no validation.

People stared:

“Isn’t that the prince?”

“Why isn’t he wearing the crown?”

“Has he lost his mind?”

“Is he seeking attention?”

Aren did not react.

He didn’t lower his head.

He didn’t explain.

He simply walked—long spine, soft breath, wide gaze.

That was his first step toward freedom.

CHAPTER 2 – THE CLOUD OF VOICES

As he entered the marketplace, Aren felt something forming over his head:

a gray cloud made of whispers and opinions.

It was the Cloud of Voices, an invisible entity that followed anyone who lived in search of approval.

The cloud murmured:

“What if they don’t respect you?”

“What if they don’t take you seriously?”

“What if they judge you?”

“What if they reject you?”

Aren felt pressure in his chest…

but he remembered his intention.

He closed his eyes.

Inhaled softly through his nose.

Exhaled even slower.

His body loosened.

His mind cleared.

And the cloud… shrank a little.

“Interesting,” Aren thought.

“If I control my breath, I control my center.”

That day, he discovered Pillar 2: Regulation.

CHAPTER 3 – THE HALL OF A THOUSAND MIRRORS

When he returned to the castle, Lysar, the royal mage, was waiting.

“You’ve taken an important step,” said Lysar.

“But to continue, you must know yourself without external reflections.”

He guided Aren to the Hall of a Thousand Mirrors.

Every mirror showed a different version of him:

• taller

• shorter

• stronger

• weaker

• older

• younger

• more handsome

• more ordinary

“All these reflections,” Lysar said, “are opinions—versions others might see in you. But tell me, Aren…

Which one is truly you?”

Aren studied the mirrors.

Then he realized something profound:

None of them were him.

He was the one who observed.

The one who chose.

The one who breathed.

The one who walked without a crown.

“I am the one behind all these reflections,” he said.

“Exactly,” Lysar nodded.

“You have discovered Pillar 1: Inner Identity.”

One by one, the mirrors went dark.

CHAPTER 4 – THE FOREST OF WHISPERS

To strengthen his inner presence, Aren traveled to the sacred forest, home of the Sibilas—

invisible spirits who repeated the thoughts of others.

As he entered, he heard:

“What if you’re not enough?”

“What if they compare you?”

“What if you disappoint them?”

“What if they talk about you?”

Aren almost turned his head toward the voices,

but he remembered:

I will not listen to what does not belong to my center.

He placed his attention on his feet.

Felt the earth.

Relaxed his shoulders.

Breathed slowly.

The more present he became…

the weaker the whispers grew.

Until finally—

silence.

He understood:

External validation only has power when you abandon your body and live in your mind.

CHAPTER 5 – THE BRIDGE OF ARROWS

His final training would be the most challenging.

Lysar led him to a narrow bridge surrounded by one hundred archers.

“Each arrow represents an opinion, a criticism, a rejection, a comparison, an expectation,” said the mage.

“Walk without stopping and none will touch you.

But seek approval… and even one arrow will wound you.”

Aren inhaled deeply.

Soft gaze.

Relaxed posture.

Quiet strength.

And he walked.

Arrows flew past him—

some close enough to feel the wind—

yet none touched him.

He was not seeking applause.

Not seeking respect.

Not seeking recognition.

He simply walked from his center.

Lysar smiled:

“You have mastered Pillar 3: Action Without Validation.”

CHAPTER 6 – THE WOMAN OF FIRE

Aren returned to the kingdom.

The sky above the palace glowed orange, as if sunset itself had entered the gardens.

Flames spiraled in slow circles, forming a ring of light.

At its center stood a woman with hair like burning copper.

Kaela.

The Woman of Fire.

“Your fear still burns,” she said.

“But not for the reasons you think.”

She raised a flame shaped like Aren himself—hesitant, doubtful, comparing.

“What fear do I still carry?” he asked.

“Fear of not being enough.

Fear of disappointing.

Fear of failing in someone else’s story.”

Aren straightened his spine.

“I am enough because I choose to be.”

The flame shattered.

“You have discovered Pillar 4: Self-Worth Without Comparison.”

CHAPTER 7 – THE BLACK MOUNTAIN

At the Black Mountain, he saw words carved into the stone:

“Not enough.”

“Not strong.”

“Not capable.”

“Not chosen.”

“Not worthy.”

Each phrase felt heavy as chains.

He touched the stone and whispered:

“These words are not mine.”

The mountain cracked with light.

The chains dissolved.

At the summit stood an obsidian throne.

Aren approached it… but did not sit.

“My place is not above others.

My place is within myself.”

The throne collapsed to dust.

He had mastered Pillar 5: Authority Without Superiority.

CHAPTER 8 – THE INNER CROWN

Back at the kingdom, Lysar and Kaela awaited him.

“Show us the crown,” they said.

Aren frowned.

“I left it behind.”

“Not that one.”

A warmth rose inside him—

from his breath,

from his spine,

from the stillness he carried.

A faint golden circle appeared above his head—

not metal,

not heavy,

just presence.

His inner crown.

CHAPTER 9 – THE RETURN

Aren walked through the village.

People whispered:

“Is he different?”

“He feels stronger.”

“He looks free.”

And a child asked:

“Why doesn’t the prince wear a crown?”

His father replied:

“Because the strongest crown…

is the one you don’t need to show.”

EPILOGUE – THE CROWNLESS KING

At sunrise, Aren breathed deeply.

Long spine.

Soft gaze.

Quiet presence.

He walked not as a ruler.

Not as a prince.

But as himself.

And that made him unstoppable.

He was the Crownless King.

Fantasy

About the Creator

Luis Carlos Daza rios

Storyteller exploring light, change, and the beauty of new beginnings.

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