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The Clockwork Murmur

A Race Against Shadows in a Town That Never Sleeps

By Alisher JumayevPublished about a month ago 6 min read
The Clockwork Murmur
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The small city of Larkridge had always been known for two things: its clock tower and its secrets. Most people thought the tower was just a relic of old architecture—harmless, beautiful, and always on time.

Detective Mara Ellington knew better.

She was standing inside the tower now, the air thick with dust and the scent of machine oil, as gears clicked overhead like teeth grinding in a metal jaw. At her feet lay a corpse—male, late forties, throat slit with surgical precision. His wristwatch was shattered, its hands frozen at exactly 2:17 a.m.

The third murder in two weeks.

Three victims.

Three broken watches.

Three identical times.

The press had already named the killer.

The Clockwork Phantom.

Mara knelt beside the body, running a gloved hand along the cold stone floor. “Clean kill. No hesitation. No struggle.”

Her partner, Luka Hart, stood near the wall, flashlight slicing through the dimness. “Whoever he is, he knows this tower better than its engineers.”

Mara looked up at the massive gears shifting above them. “Which means he’s local.”

“Or,” Luka said grimly, “he’s one of the people who helped build it.”

Mara straightened. A breeze swept through the room. She felt watched.

The gears groaned. The hands on the giant clock outside began to move again.

Time, it seemed, waited for no one—not even murderers.

And especially not Detective Mara Ellington.

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Twenty-Four Hours Earlier

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Larkridge Police Department smelled like burnt coffee and old files—two things Mara hated. She dropped a stack of reports onto her desk, ignoring the room’s chatter.

Luka appeared, holding a newspaper. “He struck again.”

“I know,” Mara muttered.

“He left something this time.”

Mara’s eyes snapped up. “What?”

Luka unfolded a crumpled evidence bag. Inside was a single sheet of paper, written in spidery ink:

When the fourth hand breaks, the city will remember its sins.

Mara felt a chill as she read the words. This killer wasn’t just smart—he was theatrical.

Luka tilted his head. “You ever heard of a ‘fourth hand’ on a clock?”

“No.” Mara frowned. “But he wants us to think bigger. This isn’t personal. It’s symbolic.”

“Symbolic of what?”

“That,” Mara said, standing abruptly, “is what we’re going to find out.”

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The First Thread

Their first stop was Larkridge’s historical archives. A cramped basement filled with documents nobody but librarians cared about.

Until now.

The archivist, an old man named Cedric Wren, shuffled forward. “Detective Ellington? I heard you’re looking into clock tower records.”

Mara nodded. “Anything construction-related. Especially involving the original architects.”

Cedric led them to a dusty cabinet labeled “1852–1890.” He pulled out a folder.

“Larkridge Clock Tower was built by a company called—”

“—Warren Mechanical,” Mara finished. “I’ve seen the name.”

Cedric adjusted his glasses. “Not the whole name. It was originally Warren & Ellington Mechanical Engineering.”

Mara froze.

Luka turned slowly toward her. “Ellington… like your family?”

Cedric nodded. “Your great-great-grandfather co-designed the tower.”

A pulse hammered in Mara’s ears. She had grown up hearing vague stories about her ancestors—but nothing about a clock tower.

Cedric handed her a blueprint.

“This tower… it wasn’t just a monument,” he whispered. “It had hidden rooms. Secret passages.”

Mara felt the story shift under her feet.

The killer wasn’t choosing random victims.

He was following a blueprint.

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The Second Thread

Victim three—Robert Hensley—had been an accountant. Victim two was a retired police sergeant. Victim one had been a lawyer.

Surface-level connections: none.

Backgrounds: different.

Ages: different.

But Mara found it—the thread the killer hadn’t intended her to pull quite so early.

All three men had held positions of authority. All had access to old city records. All had been involved, directly or indirectly, in a closed case from twenty-two years ago.

The Brayford Fire.

A fire that had destroyed the west district.

A fire that had killed five people.

A fire officially labeled “accidental.”

But Mara had always suspected otherwise.

And suddenly, so did the killer.

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The Man With No Shadow

By nightfall, Mara and Luka were back in the clock tower. Rain hammered the windows. Thunder rolled like a dark omen.

“We’re missing something,” Luka said, pacing. “Why kill people connected to a fire? What’s the link to clocks?”

“Maybe time is the link.” Mara scanned the room. “Maybe the fire didn’t start at night like they reported. Maybe the time was falsified.”

“Why falsify the time?”

Mara looked up at the massive gears. “To create an alibi.”

A figure moved behind them.

Mara spun.

A man stepped from the shadows, rain dripping from his coat. He wore a mask made of thin metallic plates—shifting, reflective, hiding his face.

The Clockwork Phantom.

He held a pocket watch between two gloved fingers. Its hands were frozen at—

2:17 a.m.

Mara drew her gun. “Drop it.”

The Phantom tilted his head like a curious bird. “Detective Ellington. You’re late.”

Luka raised his weapon. “Hands where we can see them!”

“You cannot stop the fourth breaking,” the Phantom said calmly. “The city will answer for what it buried.”

“Why these men?” Mara snapped. “Why them?”

“They lied,” he whispered. “They lied about the time. They lied about the fire. And your family helped build the cover.”

Mara stiffened. “What do you mean?”

“Your ancestor didn’t just build the tower,” the Phantom said softly. “He helped burn the district.”

Her heart plummeted.

Luka’s voice was barely a whisper. “Mara… that can’t be true.”

The Phantom stepped backward onto a metal platform connected to the gears.

“It’s time to reveal the truth.”

He threw the pocket watch into the machinery.

A deafening roar filled the tower.

The gears screamed.

The clock hands outside spun wildly.

The entire tower shook.

“RUN!” Mara yelled.

The Phantom vanished into the shadows.

But he left something behind.

A fourth watch.

Its hands frozen at a time Mara had always feared.

MIDNIGHT.

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The Third Thread: Buried Sin

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The Phantom’s words haunted Mara as she and Luka tore through old records, searching—no, hunting—for the truth.

By dawn, they found it.

A hidden city file.

Locked.

Sealed for a century.

Luka pried it open.

Inside was a confession.

Not from the killer.

Not from the victims.

But from Arthur Ellington—Mara’s ancestor.

In neat handwriting:

We burned Brayford to hide the machine. We falsified the clocks to create an alibi. We lied to the entire city to protect a secret that should never have existed.

Mara felt her blood go cold. “Machine… what machine?”

Before Luka could answer, the ground trembled.

Then the lights went out.

A voice echoed through the station intercom:

“Tick-tock, Detective. The fourth hand breaks tonight.”

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The Final Chase

Night fell like a blade.

Mara and Luka raced to the clock tower—the place where it had all begun. The storm had worsened. Lightning carved the sky open.

Inside, the tower glowed an ominous red. The machinery churned violently.

At the top, on the highest platform, stood the Phantom.

He held a lit match.

Behind him loomed a massive cylindrical device—something ancient, mechanical, and terrifying.

The machine her ancestor tried to hide.

“Mara Ellington,” the Phantom called out. “Your family built this. They killed to protect it.”

“What is it?” she demanded.

“A machine that controls time.”

Her breath caught.

“Your ancestor wanted to freeze the city at a perfect moment,” the Phantom said. “But the experiment failed. Brayford burned. And they blamed fate.”

The match dropped.

The machine roared to life.

Metal shrieked. The clock tower groaned.

Time itself began to distort—gears spinning backward and forward all at once.

“Mara!” Luka screamed. “Stop him!”

She bolted up the stairs as the Phantom leapt onto the machine.

Mara tackled him.

They crashed onto the platform.

He swung a metal tool—she dodged, grabbed his wrist, slammed him into the railing.

His mask cracked.

A familiar face stared back at her.

Cedric Wren.

The archivist.

“The city must remember,” he gasped. “Even if it kills us all.”

Then the railing snapped.

Cedric fell.

Mara lunged—

Their fingers brushed—

But he vanished into the abyss.

The machine blazed brighter, gears splitting, time shrieking like a wounded animal.

“MARA!” Luka shouted. “Shut it down!”

She dove toward the core panel. Sparks exploded. Steam hissed. She slammed her fist against a lever—

And pulled.

The machine choked.

Stopped.

Silence swallowed the tower.

Then—

The giant clock struck midnight.

One.

Two.

Three.

Four.

Nothing shattered.

The fourth hand did not break.

Time—for now—was saved.

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After the Hour

The city stirred with morning light.

Mara stood outside the tower, staring at the sunrise washing over Larkridge.

Luka approached. “You okay?”

“No,” she whispered. “But I will be.”

He nodded. “Cedric was right about one thing. The city deserved the truth.”

“And now,” Mara said quietly, “it has it.”

They walked away together as the clock tower chimed behind them—steady, calm, and finally honest.

Because time, like truth, could only be hidden for so long.

And Detective Mara Ellington had just begun uncovering both.

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Alisher Jumayev

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