
In a quiet town where nothing ever seemed to change, there was a tiny shop squeezed between two tall buildings. Its sign read:
“Elias Gray — Clockmaker.”
But everyone in town knew something strange:
The clocks inside never ticked at the same rhythm.
Some ran too fast.
Some ran too slow.
And some… didn’t move at all.
But Elias didn’t repair clocks the way others did.
He repaired moments.
One rainy afternoon, a girl named Mira entered the shop holding a small silver pocket watch. The watch wasn’t broken—but Mira was. Her days felt heavy, and she couldn’t understand why.
Elias took the watch gently and placed it on his wooden table.
“It’s not the metal that’s tired,” he said softly.
“It’s the time inside it.”
Mira frowned. “Time can get tired?”
“Of course,” Elias smiled. “Every moment you live… leaves a footprint.”
He opened the back of the watch.
A faint blue glow spilled out, like a trapped memory.
Inside, Mira saw tiny fragments: her laughter, her tears, her quiet mornings, her sleepless nights. All tangled, all fighting for space.
“No wonder you feel heavy,” Elias whispered.
“Your moments are carrying you instead of you carrying them.”
With a careful twist of his tools, Elias untangled the glowing fragments. The blue light settled and began to pulse calmly, like a heartbeat.
“There,” he said. “Your time is yours again.”
Mira took the watch, feeling strangely lighter… as if someone removed an invisible weight from her shoulders.
Before she left, she asked,
“How do you fix moments for yourself?”
Elias looked at the forest of clocks around him.
Some ticking, some silent, some spinning backwards.
“I don’t,” he answered.
“That’s why my clocks are always wrong. I give all the good time away.”
Mira stepped outside into the rain—
and for the first time in months, it felt warm.
About the Creator
Gabriel Waltone
Writer of short stories and imaginative worlds. I create meaningful scenes inspired by everyday moments and a deep love for storytelling.
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