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🌌 The Clockmaker’s Promise

Sometimes, time doesn’t heal it remembers.

By Asghar ali awanPublished 3 months ago ‱ 3 min read
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In the heart of a fog-covered town stood a little shop that never seemed to close.

Its wooden sign read: “Elias & Timepieces: Repairs for All Things Broken.”

The shopkeeper, Elias, was an old man with silver hair, kind eyes, and a voice as soft as the ticking of his clocks. The townsfolk said he could fix anything from shattered watches to broken hearts.

But there was one rule in his shop:

Never ask about the clock in the glass case.

It sat on a high shelf, covered in dust, its hands forever frozen at 11:11. The clock’s glass shimmered strangely under the lamplight like it was alive, remembering something.

The Stranger

One rainy evening, a young woman named Lila entered the shop. Her umbrella dripped onto the wooden floor as she held out a small pocket watch.

“It belonged to my father,” she said. “It stopped working the day he died. Can you fix it?”

Elias took the watch gently, turning it in his hand. “Some clocks,” he murmured, “stop for reasons beyond repair. But I’ll see what I can do.”

As he worked, Lila wandered around the shop, listening to the endless ticking. It was like a heartbeat steady, eternal. Then she noticed the clock in the glass case.

“Why is that one covered?” she asked.

Elias looked up sharply. “That one’s not for sale,” he said quickly. “It keeps
 different kind of time.”

Lila smiled faintly. “Everyone has their secrets, Mr. Elias.”

He didn’t answer, just adjusted his glasses and continued working.

The Secret of 11:11

Over the next few days, Lila returned often. Elias told her stories about clocks that stopped at moments of grief, love, or destiny. “Time,” he would say, “has a memory. It doesn’t move in a straight line it bends around emotion.”

One evening, while Elias stepped into the back room, Lila couldn’t resist. She lifted the glass case covering the frozen clock.

The instant her fingers touched it, the room went silent.

All the ticking stopped.

Even the rain outside seemed to freeze midair.

Then a whisper faint and fragile filled the air.

“Promise
 you won’t forget me
”

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Lila stumbled back, heart racing. The hands of the clock suddenly moved, just one tick from 11:11 to 11:12.

When Elias returned, he looked pale. “You touched it, didn’t you?”

“I It spoke,” she stammered. “It said”

“I know what it said,” Elias interrupted softly. “It always says the same thing.”

The Clockmaker’s Past

That night, Elias told her the truth.

Many years ago, he had been engaged to a woman named Amara. They were inseparable, dreaming of growing old together. But one winter’s night, a carriage accident took her life.

When he found her, she was still wearing the pocket watch he had made for her the same clock now sealed in the glass case. At the moment she died, it stopped at 11:11.

In grief, Elias spent years trying to repair it, hoping that if he could restart its ticking, he might somehow bring her back.

But when he finally succeeded, strange things began to happen whispers, moving shadows, and glimpses of Amara’s reflection in the glass.

“I think she’s trapped between seconds,” he said quietly. “Between what was and what could have been.”

The Final Repair

Days passed. Lila couldn’t stop thinking about the whisper.

On the seventh evening, she returned to the shop. Elias was gone, but the lights were on. The clock in the glass case ticked again, faintly glowing.

Her heart pounded as she approached it. “Amara?” she whispered.

In the glass, her reflection shifted and for an instant, she saw another woman’s face smiling gently back at her.

Then a voice:

“Promise
 don’t let him wait anymore.”

The air grew colder. The other clocks began ticking in unison, faster and faster, until the entire shop sounded like one enormous heartbeat.

Suddenly, the frozen clock’s hands started spinning backward. The glow grew brighter, blinding. Lila shielded her eyes and when she opened them, Elias stood in front of her, holding the clock.

“It’s time,” he said softly.

The clock struck 11:11 one last time and shattered.

The shop fell silent.

When the townsfolk entered the next morning, they found the shop empty. Every clock inside had stopped at 11:11. Only one thing remained on the counter:

Lila’s father’s repaired pocket watch ticking softly, as if nothing had happened.

đŸ’« Moral:

Some promises are timeless. Love doesn’t always end sometimes it just finds another way to keep ticking.

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About the Creator

Asghar ali awan

I'm Asghar ali awan

"Senior storyteller passionate about crafting timeless tales with powerful morals. Every story I create carries a deep lesson, inspiring readers to reflect and grow ,I strive to leave a lasting impact through words".

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