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The Clockmaker’s Promise

He Built Clocks to Hold Hearts—Until One Tried to Steal Mine

By HabibullahPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

Part 1: The Inheritance of Gears

Elara’s grandfather died on a Tuesday. By Friday, she stood in his clock shop, "Chronos & Heart," breathing air thick with oil and loneliness. Hundreds of timepieces covered the walls—grandfather clocks sighing like tired giants, pocket watches humming in drawers, cuckoo clocks silent behind sealed doors.

"Everything to Miss Elara Vance," the lawyer said. "Including Box 13."

Box 13 held no jewels. Only a velvet-lined case containing twelve tiny, exquisite clocks, each labeled in Grandfather’s cramped script:

Mr. Alden: Regret (3yrs, 7mos)

Little Sophie: Lost Laughter (18mos)

Dr. Reed: Forgotten Courage (Decade+)

Beneath them lay a note:

"Elara—Real time isn’t in hands, but hearts. I kept my promise. Find yours before it stops."

Her "heart-clock." The one he’d been building the night he died. Where was it?

Part 2: The Broken Mechanism

As dusk bled through grimy windows, Elara touched "Dr. Reed’s" clock. Cold brass. Then—

—a hospital corridor—

—a child crying—

—her own hands trembling, unable to inject the lifesaving serum—

—overwhelming shame—

She jerked back. The clock’s gears glowed faintly blue.

Emotions. Grandfather hadn’t just repaired clocks; he’d safeguarded pain people couldn’t carry. But her heart-clock—meant to hold her grief after her parents’ drowning—was gone.

A shadow filled the doorway. Aris Thorne, property developer, smelling of cigars and ambition. "Condolences, Miss Vance. Here for Grandfather’s payment." He slapped a contract on the counter. "He promised me a motivational timepiece."

Elara scanned the document. Dated the day he died. Payment: "One (1) Custom Courage-Regulator."

Courage. Grandfather’s notes warned: "Strong emotions distort if confined too long."

"I need to find it first," Elara stalled.

Thorne smiled thinly. "Oh, I have it." He unbuttoned his shirt. Nestled against his chest pulsed a brass heart, its gears grinding violently. Golden light leaked from its seams. "Changed my life! No fear, no doubt… just action." He patted it. "Pity the old man didn’t live to see me demolish this street for luxury flats."

Part 3: The Ghost in the Gears

That night, Elara dreamt of her grandfather at his workbench, blood staining his apron. "Fix the promise, Lara," he whispered. "Before his courage becomes cruelty… and your sorrow turns to stone."

She woke to a click. Box 13 had opened a hidden compartment. Inside: a tiny silver key and a faded photo of her five-year-old self, sobbing at the docks after her parents’ funeral. On the back, Grandfather’s writing:

"Promised to carry this for you. Forgive me for failing twice."

The shop’s clocks suddenly screamed—a metallic shriek shaking dust from rafters. Elara covered her ears. Through the window, she saw Thorne’s construction crews starting early, bulldozers snarling toward Mrs. Gable’s flower shop. Thorne stood watching, his heart-clock blazing like a miniature sun.

The clocks are connected, she realized. His amplified "courage" is hurting them.

Part 4: The Unwinding

Elara confronted Thorne at the demolition site. "Remove the clock! It’s poisoning you!"

"Poison?" He laughed, eyes fever-bright. "This is clarity!" He kicked Mrs. Gable’s rosebushes. "Sentiment is weakness!"

As petals scattered, Thorne’s heart-clock sparked. He gasped, clutching his chest. The clock’s casing cracked, releasing not light, but thick, coiling shadows that smelled of gunpowder and panic.

"Battle of Marne… 1917…" he choked, suddenly terrified. "They’re in the trenches—I can’t lead the charge—"

Elara understood. This wasn’t his courage. Grandfather had stored a soldier’s decades-old valor inside—and now, fused with Thorne’s ambition, it was unraveling into the original terror it had masked.

"Give it to me!" She lunged.

"Never!" Thorne stumbled back. The shadows deepened, forming phantom barbed wire and mud. Bulldozers veered wildly as drivers saw hallucinations.

Part 5: The Promise Kept

Elara sprinted to the shop. She seized Dr. Reed’s regret-clock and Sophie’s laughter-clock, smashing them together on her grandfather’s anvil.

Golden light erupted. The freed emotions swirled—a child’s giggle entwining with a doctor’s remorse—then shot toward Thorne’s unraveling heart-clock like a healing lance.

CLANG!

The soldier’s trapped terror retreated. Thorne collapsed, the heart-clock dimming. Elara pried it from his grasp. Its gears were bent, leaking oily tears.

"Fix the promise," Grandfather’s voice echoed in her mind.

She knew what to do.

At the docks where her parents drowned, Elara placed Thorne’s broken clock beside her silver key. She whispered to the sea: "I release your sorrow, Grandfather." Then she inserted the key into the heart-clock’s shattered face.

It opened.

Inside lay not gears, but a tiny, perfect seashell—the one she’d held crying in the photo. Grandfather hadn’t stored her grief; he’d kept hope for her.

As dawn broke, Elara pressed the shell to her heart. Warmth spread through her, gentle as tide. The heart-clock disintegrated into salt and copper dust.

Behind her, Thorne wept—not with borrowed courage, but his own raw regret. "I’ll rebuild the flower shop," he rasped. "Properly."

Epilogue: Chronos & Heart Reborn

Elara never found her heart-clock. She didn’t need to.

She reopened the shop, repairing clocks with a new purpose: not to trap emotions, but to transform them. Mrs. Gable’s "loneliness clock" became a chime that played when neighbors visited. Dr. Reed’s regret powered a clock that alerted hospitals when children needed comfort.

As for the silver key? Elara hung it by the door. On rough days, she’d touch it, hearing not her childhood sobs, but her grandfather’s whisper:

"Time doesn’t heal, my love. It just gives us room to grow new hearts beside the broken gears."

And in the shop’s window, a new sign glowed:

"Chronos & Heart: Where Time Finds Its Humanity."

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Habibullah

Storyteller of worlds seen & unseen ✨ From real-life moments to pure imagination, I share tales that spark thought, wonder, and smiles daily

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