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The Clockmaker’s Daughter

Every clock in her father’s shop stopped at the same time—except one, which began to tick backward.

By Tariq AhmadPublished 5 months ago 3 min read

He promised to come back from the war. The river kept the secret of whether he did.

Every dawn for three years I walked to the banks of the Liriope, where the fog hung low and the water whispered like a confidant. I carried his last letter in my coat pocket, creased and soft from being read so often the words were fading: “I’ll return with the spring floods, Mara. Wait for me.”

The floods came and went. He did not.

Villagers whispered that soldiers either died or forgot, but the river never forgot. It curled around our town like a silver ribbon, devouring bridges, ferrying gossip, hiding sins. I used to think it was alive; he had called it our “old guardian.” He said if anything happened, I should listen to it.

One gray morning, the current shifted. A shape bobbed against the reeds, tangled in cattails — not a body, but a small tin box sealed with wax. My hands trembled as I pried it open. Inside lay his wedding ring, a sprig of pressed lavender, and a note so water-stained only one line remained legible:

“Forgive what I’ve done.”

I clutched the ring until it dug crescents into my palm. “Where are you?” I whispered to the river. “What did you do?”

A breeze rose. The water rippled and, for an instant, his face formed in the surface — tired, eyes shadowed, lips moving without sound. Then it broke apart.

That night I couldn’t sleep. The tin box sat on my table like a wound. By candlelight I turned it over and over until my fingers found a hidden catch beneath the lid. A second slip of paper slid out, drier, clearer:

“They made us burn the village on the border. I took a child and fled. If they find me, they’ll kill us both. I’m heading north along the river. Look for the signal fire.”

My heart pounded. Not dead. Not gone. Hiding.

I ran to the banks at dawn. Mist cloaked the water. For hours I scanned the far shore, my breath clouding, my hope burning. Then, faint and flickering, a column of smoke rose from the bend two miles away.

I followed the path through brambles until the ground turned to mud and the trees to twisted silhouettes. The woods were eerily silent; even the birds had fled. Once, a single gunshot cracked somewhere upriver, echoing like a warning. My pulse quickened. Every snapped twig felt like a soldier’s boot behind me.

There, beside a driftwood fire, stood a man and a small girl wrapped in a threadbare army coat. His hair was longer, face gaunt, but the way he said my name—“Mara”—collapsed the years between us.

He told me everything: how the child’s parents had perished, how he couldn’t follow orders, how he deserted. “They’ll never stop looking,” he said. “You should go back. Pretend you never saw me.”

I looked at the girl’s wide, frightened eyes. She clung to him as though he were a raft in a storm. “You saved her,” I said. “You’re already lost to them. But you’re not lost to me.”

He pressed the tin box into my hands. “If they come, toss it in the river. Say you found only ashes.”

I closed his fingers back over it. “No. We’ll leave together.”

But searchlights pierced the fog before I finished. Voices shouted on the opposite bank. Dogs barked. He met my gaze—apology, love, and resignation in one look. He waded into the river up to his waist, pushing the girl toward me. “Take her,” he said. “Please.”

“No!” I grabbed his sleeve, but the current surged. Soldiers crashed through the undergrowth behind me. He shoved the child into my arms, then let the water take him.

He didn’t scream. He only raised a hand once before the river swallowed him whole.

The girl sobbed against my shoulder as I ran into the forest. Behind us, the river rolled on, smooth and silver, keeping its final secret.

Years later people asked where I’d found her, how she came to call me mother. I only say she drifted in on the tide. About the man who promised to return, I speak nothing. The river remembers; that is enough.

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