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The Case Of the Monsoon Shadows

A detective story in a small town where every monsoon season, male inhabitants disappear mysteriously.

By ZanePublished 3 years ago 3 min read

The Case of the Monsoon Shadows

The sleepy town of EdenBrook, isolated, and cradled between an expanse of red hills, held a chilling secret. Its whitewashed cottages, covered in blooming roses, concealed a dreadful mystery that awakened every monsoon season. A curse that spirited away male inhabitants, leaving their whereabouts unknown and the town gasping for answers.

I, Detective Rain Ryder, intrigued by the unusual pattern and egged on by the challenge, arrived in EdenBrook just at the brink of the monsoon season. My purpose was to crack open this eerie mystery.

Small towns have their charms, but they also guard their secrets well, shrouded in a tapestry of hushed voices and suspicious glances. My first interaction with the townsfolk was at Mabel's Diner, a quaint little establishment off the town square. The sweet scent of pies mingled with the metallic taste of fear that clung in hidden corners.

"Sir," Mabel warned, "these parts be cursed. You meddling with forces larger than law now." Her words were ominous, but instead of deterring me, it steeled my resolve.

My investigation began at the archives, housed in the town's modest library. The meticulous records painted a startling picture. Since 1898, in EdenBrook, able-bodied men disappeared every monsoon season, leaving no traces. The number totaled a staggering 42 now, from a grocery store owner to a construction worker, an artist to a wandering nomad.

The monsoon hit EdenBrook in roiling grey clouds and relentless sheets of rain. The ambiance turned even more somber. I paced the now empty lanes, trying to pull at the threads of this mystery.

I visited the homes of previous victims, asking questions, examining personal effects, hoping to discover a common thread. In the whispers of the grieving families, I felt an echo of unarticulated fear, but nothing concrete, nothing substantial.

Until I met Hannah, the town's eccentric recluse. Residing high on the hills, she was known for her wild mane of silver hair and witch-like demeanor with an intense disdain for the townsfolk. Yet, her eyes held a captivating cloud of mystery, and to those, I was drawn.

"Sit, detective," she beckoned, "You search for answers in the wind when they lie beneath the earth."

Listening to her tales felt like diving into a whirlpool of folklore and cryptic riddles. Hannah’s ancestors, she elaborated, were the original settlers in EdenBrook known for a horrifying tradition to appease the Rain God - an able-bodied male sacrifice every monsoon season. According to her, the tradition might have been abandoned ages ago, but the divine pact was unbroken.

A sacrifice, a divine pact? I was a man of reasons and facts, and yet, here in EdenBrook, reality was being twisted, mocked, and draped in mystic folklore. But as far fetched it may be, it was my only lead.

I had a dangerous plan, one that as a detective, I never thought I'd conceive. I would offer myself as a potential victim, to unearth the truth, to catch whatever was lying underneath this cursed tradition.

The rains were ceaseless, and I decided to camp in the town square, leaving a note at the Diner, just in case. The night was eerie, as the wind danced wildly and the rains whipped around relentlessly. I remember darkness closing in, a hum rising around, and a haze. And then, nothing.

When I woke up, I was deep within the earth, surrounded by a network of tunnels. They were the town’s crypts, the sanctuary of their ancestors. In the center stood a stone altar, and beside it, a menacing figure of Pastor Jeremiah, the town's spiritual leader, tasked with keeping the tradition alive. Intimidating yet trembling, he confessed, “This is the way, detective. The rains, they demand it.”

In the end, it wasn't the divine but the fear of the divine that fed the monsoon curse. Revealing Pastor Jeremiah's horrific secret brought an end to EdenBrook's monsoon disappearances. I left the town echoing Hannah's words, "Some secrets, detective, they're woven with the threads of time. To unravel one, you unravel it all."

EdenBrook remains, but now as a town relieved of its fear, its mystery. Its whitewashed cottages still shine pretty beneath the monsoon clouds, but no longer shield a secret or weep for a loss. As for me, I left a part of my soul there, etched into the rain-soaked earth, tangled with EdenBrook's legend, forever tied to the 'Case of the Monsoon Shadows')

AdventureClassicalFableHistoricalHorrorMysterySci FiScriptShort StoryFan Fiction

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Zane

📚 Avid #BookLover and #Storyteller in the making. Positively passionate about the written word. Constantly exploring new chapters.

Hey there! Feel free to ask for any stories and I'll be happy to write them for you 😄

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