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The Candle-Maker’s Daughter; A Magical Realism Story About Light, Love, and Letting Go

A poetic fantasy about a young woman who crafts candles that hold memories and the final flame that sets her free.

By Zeenat ChauhanPublished 2 months ago 3 min read

They said her candles could burn without wax, without wick, without end.

In the small seaside town of Callowmere, people came from far away to buy them not for light, but for memory.

Because when her candles burned, they didn’t just glow. They showed.

Flashes of moments long gone laughter, tears, faces half-remembered Her name was Elara, and she was the candle-maker’s daughter. But what no one knew was that every flame she lit cost her something she could never replace.

The Shop of Light:

Elara’s shop stood at the edge of the pier, where waves whispered and gulls cried.

By day, it smelled of salt and honey. By night, it shone like a constellation hundreds of candles glowing in jars of glass, each one unique.

People came carrying sorrow in their hands a photograph, a letter, a small keepsake.

Elara would melt wax, stir it with oil, and whisper into it as it cooled. When the candle burned, the memory it held would flicker to life for just one night.

No one asked how she did it. They only asked how long the light would last.

“Long enough to remember,” she always said.

The Stranger Who Didn’t Forget:

One evening, a man entered the shop carrying nothing at all.

“I’ve come to buy a candle,” he said.

Elara smiled. “What memory would you like it to hold?”

He shook his head. “I don’t want to remember. I want to forget.”

Her hands froze. “That’s not what my candles do.”

He looked at her with eyes full of storms. “Then perhaps you’ve been making them wrong.”

Elara frowned. “What did you lose?”

He hesitated. “My daughter.”

The words hit her like wind. She said softly, “I’m sorry.”

He looked away. “So am I.”

The Flame That Wept:

Despite her warning, Elara made him a candle.

She mixed wax and saltwater, added a drop of her own tears something she had never done before and whispered a name she didn’t know.

When she lit it, the flame turned deep blue.

And then she saw a little girl, laughing by the sea, her hands full of shells. The man fell to his knees.

“It’s her,” he whispered. “Her laugh… her voice…”

He reached for the flame, but it vanished.

The man wept. “Why would you show me this?”

Elara said quietly, “Because you asked to forget. And sometimes, forgetting starts with remembering.”

The Light Within:

Days turned into weeks. The man returned again and again, buying more candles each one revealing fragments of his lost life.

Elara began to notice something strange. With each candle she made, her reflection grew fainter in the window.

Her father’s old words echoed in her mind:

“Every light takes something from its maker. Be careful which memories you burn.”

One night, she lit a candle for herself.

It showed her as a child sitting on her father’s lap, watching him pour wax by hand, listening to him say, “Light remembers love, even when we forget.”

Tears filled her eyes. She whispered, “I miss you.”

The candle flickered. “Then make one more,” she heard him say.

The Last Candle:

The next morning, she found the man waiting. His eyes were calm for the first time.

He said, “Thank you. I think I can go on now.”

Elara smiled weakly. “I’m glad.”

Before he left, he asked, “Will you make another candle for yourself?”

She nodded. “Just one.”

That night, she poured her last wax, mixed it with her final memory the sound of her father’s laugh and set it by the window.

As the flame rose, her shop filled with light not just one color, but hundreds. Every candle she had ever made burned again, their flames dancing in unison.

And then, quietly, they went out.

The Morning After:

When the townspeople came the next day, the shop was empty. Only one candle remained, still burning faintly.

Its wax never melted.

Inside the flame, if you looked closely, you could see a girl smiling her eyes bright, her hands steady, holding light itself.

And at the door hung a small sign that read:

“For those who remember and those who wish to.”

Conclusion:

Light has a strange way of teaching us what darkness never could.

For those who came to Elara’s shop, her candles were more than wax and flame they were proof that love could outlast time, that even the smallest spark could hold a thousand memories.

And though the candle-maker’s daughter was gone, her light remained, glowing in quiet windows, in warm kitchens, in every heart brave enough to remember.

People said that if you lit one of her candles on a stormy night, you might see her standing by the sea smiling, holding a flame that never went out.

Fantasy

About the Creator

Zeenat Chauhan

I’m Zeenat Chauhan, a passionate writer who believes in the power of words to inform, inspire, and connect. I love sharing daily informational stories that open doors to new ideas, perspectives, and knowledge.

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