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The Candle Maker’s Daughter

How a little girl turned darkness into light

By Noor Ul wahabPublished 3 months ago 4 min read
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Note from Author I wrote this story to show readers that light can come from kindness, patience, and courage as well as fire and electricity. I was inspired by the small, unseen people who keep the world glowing quietly, even when their own lives are dim.

An old candle shop stood in a small town between quiet hills and dusty streets. It had warm windows all the time, walls that smelled of smoke and wax, and at night, a golden glow fell softly into the street. Rahim, the candlemaker, and his young daughter Lina were inside. Their lives were simple—just two hands working, two hearts hoping. Their little house remained dim each evening, as if saving light for others, while other homes were illuminated by the candles Rahim had made. Lina was a curious child. She enjoyed watching her father shape the wicks, pour melted wax into molds, and pray over each candle. “Each one,” he used to say, “is a piece of light for someone else.”

But Lina didn't get it. “Why do we give away all the candles, Baba?” she asked one night. Why aren't we allowed to keep some for ourselves? Rahim smiled, a tired but gentle smile. "Because, my dear, some people's lives are more difficult than our own. If we can help them see, that’s enough for me.”

Despite the fact that her tender heart was still wondering what it would be like to live in light, Lina nodded. The Struggle

Life became more difficult over the years. Oil became expensive, wax was rare, and Rahim’s hands began to tremble with age. He did, however, never stop working. Even when his eyes grew weak, he still made candles for others.

Lina began to assist him. She learned how to twist the wick, make candles smooth and even, and melt wax without burning it. But Rahim got sick one winter when there were storms that lasted for weeks. The shop became silent and cold. Each night, Lina stayed by his bedside and lit a small candle. The room's frigid temperature was softly warmed by its gentle flame. “My child... when I’m gone, don’t let the light die,” Rahim said to her in a weak voice as he held her hand one night. Lina's eyes welled up with tears. "I swear, Baba." The next morning, the light went out.

Keeping the Light Alive After Rahim's death, the town became quieter. Some people thought the candle shop would never open again. However, a faint light returned to its windows each evening. Lina kept her father's promise, now alone. She initially struggled. Her tears sometimes mixed with the melted wax, the wax got all over her hands, and it spilled. But she continued to work. Each candle she made carried a memory of her father—a lesson, a smile, a prayer.

A traveler stopped by the shop one night. He stated, "I need a candle for my journey." His face was worn and his clothes were worn out. He was given a basic white candle by Lina. He grinned as he took a look at it. “This one is small. Do you have anything more radiant? Lina gave a soft grin. "Occasionally, the tiniest lights burn the longest." Later, when the wind howled through the forest and his lantern broke, he didn't understand, but that tiny candle led him all the way home. The Festival of Light

The years passed. Lina's candles gained notoriety. They were bought by people from nearby towns for their brightness as well as the peace they brought. They said her candles burned steadier, longer, warmer—like they carried a soul inside.

A Festival of Light was announced by the town mayor one day to honor those who inspire others to hope. Each house was required to light its brightest candle. Lina worked tirelessly for days to create a unique candle that was tall, white, and wrapped in a tiny golden thread her father had previously used. Her house shone brighter than ever the night of the festival. Outside, people gathered to admire the light. A young boy whispered, "Mama, look! " while tying his mother's hand in the air. That must be the light of love.”

Through her window, Lina grinned softly. The Flame's Hidden Secret Lina spoke softly into the light as she sat next to the last flickering candle after everyone had left that evening. She said, "Baba, you were right." “We don’t need to live in brightness to share light. Every small flame we give becomes part of something bigger.”

A tear rolled down her cheek, glowing in the candlelight like a drop of gold.

The candle beside her bed gently blazed that night as she slept. It never let up, not even once. The Message Wax and fire aren't the only things that make light. It is manifested in the things we do for others, our unwavering patience, and the promises we keep. In addition to lighting up the streets, homes, and hearts, Lina's candles also carried her father's spirit forward. As a result, even today, generations later, people still tell the tale of the candlemaker's daughter, the girl who discovered that the darkest nights frequently produce the brightest light. Author Biography My name is Noor, and I'm a storyteller who writes about ordinary people who have hearts of gold. Kindness, patience, and the quiet courage that transforms lives serve as inspiration for my writing. I believe that a single candle or even a small act of love can have a significant impact on the world

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