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"The Broken Heavens"

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By Rajoan IslamPublished 10 months ago 3 min read

"The Broken Heavens"

For Aeliana, the sky had always been reliable. When she was younger, she used to lie on the grass in her family's meadow and watch the clouds float, dreaming of the tales they held—tales of faraway places, long-forgotten rulers, and odd animals. However, that was prior to the sky breaking.

It took place on the eclipse day. As if lured by some evil power, the moon started to wipe out the sun as it grew dimmer. However, the occurrence was peculiar not just because of the darkness but also because of the music. A deep, resonant hum, strange and out of place, vibrated throughout the air. As the sky literally cracked like the surface of glass, Aeliana's parents hurried to her side.

Something deeper than night—something alive—poured from the fissures that formed across the heavens.

Previously illuminated by sunlight, the world was now engulfed in darkness.

The world was altered as the sky broke apart.

The earth shook for weeks as storms and earthquakes tore across it. The sky began to fracture wider, as if the heavens themselves were being torn apart, and the air became heavy with an eerie fog. The seventeen-year-old Aeliana had spent her entire life in the aftermath. The sky served as a continual reminder of an unfathomable disaster.

Nevertheless, hope persisted despite the devastation. The sky was still broken, but people started to rebuild. Naturally inquisitive, Aeliana had never given up on finding the answers. From ancient predictions to contemporary science, she had read everything she could discover about the incident, but none of it provided a convincing explanation.

A narrow, luminous fracture in the soil, pulsing with energy, was something Aeliana had never seen before one evening when exploring the ruins of an ancient city. The same eerie resonance she had experienced during the Eclipse was there in its hum. Attracted to it, she crouched next to the fissure and discovered something inside—a dark crystal that felt cool to the touch and smooth.

A pulse of odd energy went through her, sending a shockwave through her body as her fingers touched it. She stumbled back, gasping. The world appeared to distort around her for a time. She had images at that moment—visions of the sky, not as it was now, but as it had been, full and colorful. She viewed the eclipse as a powerful and ancient force of creation rather than a disaster.

Then she saw the truth: the sky had been opened, not broken. The pieces were the remains of a world beyond, and a door had been unlocked. They were sent to monitor the delicate border between realms, and the animals leaking through the crevices were not invaders.

The storms, the cracks, the hum—all of it was a part of a larger cycle. The world needed to be revived, reformed, and healed.

Aeliana had a burning realization as the visions subsided: her world had altered, not ended. She was holding a key-like crystal. But that was not just any key. She owned it. Maybe she had always been destined to find it, or she had been picked.

A deep, booming voice rang out from the cracks above as the heavens cracked again. "Child of the stars, you have discovered it."

Heart pounding, Aeliana arose. Through the very fabric of reality, rather than words, the guardians were communicating with her. The crystal's power increased as it started to flash brighter. The sky started to mend with it. Slowly at first, but gradually, more of the sky was restored as the fissures that had previously tarnished it started to shut.

The darkness dwindled. After a lengthy period of darkness, the world started to light up again.

Aeliana, however, knew the truth. In the first place, the sky was never broken. It was always a point of entry, a means for the worlds to come together and develop as one. And the secret to connecting the two lay in her newly discovered abilities.

The energy surged around her as she held the stone above her head. She was led by the invisible but present guards, whose voices hummed in time with the ground.

And Aeliana realized as the final fissure in the sky closed. There was no destruction of the world. The energy of creation itself was transforming it, giving it a new life.

She grinned at that moment. The sky remained intact. It was just waiting to be restored by the right person. She had always been that person.

This narrative offers a developing mystery and a hopeful resolution in which the heroine not only learns the reason for the disaster but also accepts her responsibility to put it right.

-I hope the spooky story was enjoyable! If you require any changes or another story, please let me know. Thank You.-

AdventureClassicalFan FictionHistoricalHolidayMicrofictionPsychologicalScriptSeriesShort StorythrillerYoung AdultLove

About the Creator

Rajoan Islam

Hey, Life is very beautiful, you have to enjoy it while it lasts.

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