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The Boy Who Could Borrow Time

Every Second He Took Came with a Price.

By Mati Henry Published 7 months ago 3 min read

In a sleepy town where the clocks always seemed a few minutes slow, lived a boy named Elian. He wasn’t like other children—he never hurried, never panicked, and somehow always arrived just before disaster struck. It wasn’t luck. It wasn’t instinct. Elian had a secret: he could borrow time.

He discovered it when he was eight. His dog, Rolo, had darted into the street after a ball, and a car had come speeding toward him. In panic, Elian screamed—and the world paused. Not froze entirely, but slowed, like thick honey dripping off a spoon. He watched as the car inched forward sluggishly, and in that instant, he ran, scooped Rolo up, and jumped to safety.

When it was over, Elian was exhausted. A sharp ache pulsed behind his eyes, and he slept for 14 hours straight. But Rolo was alive.

Over time, Elian learned how to control it. He could "borrow" time—stealing moments from the future to use in the present. At first, it was innocent. Extra seconds to finish a test. A few moments to dodge a thrown ball. But every time he borrowed, he paid with fatigue, blackouts, and strange dreams of events yet to happen.

By the time he was sixteen, Elian had mastered his gift. Time would ripple around him when he called on it. He could stretch a minute into five, outrun storms, avoid fights, and even prevent accidents no one else saw coming.

But there were rules—harsh, invisible rules.

The first: He could never borrow more than five minutes at once.

The second: Time taken could never be given back. It was always deducted from his future.

The third: If he borrowed too often, the future would bleed. Reality would bend, twist, and sometimes break.

He learned this the hard way.

One winter evening, Elian’s younger sister, Nora, fell through the ice at the lake. Without thinking, he borrowed time—more than he ever had. Ten minutes. Enough to sprint to the lake, dive in, and pull her out. But as he did, the world around him distorted. Colors flickered. Sound stuttered. And when he looked up at the sky, it shimmered like a broken mirror.

Nora lived. But Elian collapsed, and when he woke three days later, he had aged two years. His reflection showed a boy of eighteen—but he had only just turned sixteen.

His mother cried when she saw him. “What’s happening to you?” she asked, her voice trembling. Elian didn’t answer.

He began to see the future in fragments—flashes of things not yet done. A fire at school. A stranger crying at the train station. A friend’s betrayal. The more he tried to change what he saw, the more his own future unraveled.

Time, it turned out, was jealous.

It didn’t like being stolen.

One night, Elian met a man in the woods—an old, pale figure draped in black, his eyes like dark pools of midnight. “Borrowing time?” the man rasped. “Or gambling with fate?”

“I saved lives,” Elian replied.

“And shortened your own,” the figure said. “Each moment you take brings your end closer. You’ve bartered years for seconds.”

Elian's heart pounded. “Can I stop?”

The man gave a chilling smile. “Only if you return what you've taken.”

“But how?”

“By giving it to someone else.”

Elian stood frozen. Give time to someone else? What would that even mean?

The man vanished into the night, leaving Elian with a choice—and a ticking clock.

In the days that followed, Elian stopped using his ability. He let the moments flow, even when they were painful. He failed a test. Missed a train. Watched someone fall and couldn’t stop it in time.

But something strange happened: the visions stopped. The headaches faded. His reflection looked normal again.

Still, he had debts to pay.

Then, one summer morning, Elian made his decision.

He found a hospital volunteer program and signed up. He began spending hours with the elderly—listening, helping, talking. For every hour he gave, it felt like something returned. A lightness. A balance.

One day, he met a dying man named Thomas. The doctors gave him weeks. Elian stayed by his side daily. On the last night, Thomas smiled and said, “You’re a strange boy, Elian. I feel like I’ve been gifted time.”

Elian looked at the clock.

He had.

Quietly, Elian had learned the final secret: time borrowed can only be repaid with presence, compassion, and sacrifice. It could not be undone, but it could be balanced—moment by moment.

Years later, Elian would no longer borrow time. But people swore he always seemed to show up just when they needed him most. They called it intuition.

But deep down, Elian knew what it really was:
A life paid forward, second by precious second.

Young Adult

About the Creator

Mati Henry

Storyteller. Dream weaver. Truth seeker. I write to explore worlds both real and imagined—capturing emotion, sparking thought, and inspiring change. Follow me for stories that stay with you long after the last word.

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  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    What a heartwarming story 😀

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