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The Apparition of Recognition

Solitude's Prison

By Carolyn PattonPublished 3 months ago 2 min read

The gilded cage of her existence, though adorned with smiles and nods, had long been transmuted into a prison. Each year refined the artifice, polished the sepulchre, until no trace of her true self was permitted to emerge. The wound—that wound inflicted by that man—bled unseen, festering in silence, its venom consuming marrow, thought, and spirit alike.

To those around her, she was calm, composed, indifferent. But in truth she was a phantom among the living, unseen and unheard. Her own voice, once bright, had become a ghostly whisper within her skull. So she retreated, walling herself away in chambers of solitude until only the ragged rhythm of despair remained to remind her she yet lived.

And then—he appeared.

Not with thunder nor lightning, but as though summoned from the very dust motes drifting through the pale silver of the moon. A figure, indistinct at first, then coalescing—eyes fathomless as a well from which no light returned. He stood at the threshold of her exile, and his gaze pierced her as though she were made of glass.

She trembled. “Who—who are you, that enters unbidden into the solitude I have built?”

The figure inclined his head, his voice low, resonant, and curiously familiar.

“I am he who has walked with you in silence. I am the keeper of your unvoiced sorrows.”

A shiver coursed through her spine. “You speak as though you know me. And yet—you are but a stranger.”

“Stranger?” His lips curved into the faintest shadow of a smile. “Nay, madam, I am no stranger to grief, nor to you. I have watched as the wound festered—yes, that wound. I have seen the ache that lingers where love ought to dwell.”

Her breath caught, the words trembling forth despite herself:

“You—know of it? The wound no physician may see, nor priest absolve?”

He stepped nearer, the air itself chilling as though night thickened around them.

“I know it as I know mine own. The hollow echo in your breast, the silence where once there was tenderness—I have suffered its weight also. You, unseen, unloved, unacknowledged—each scar upon your soul mirrors my own.”

She recoiled, yet could not look away. “How could you know this? I have never spoken—I have never dared to speak of such things.”

His eyes, black as eternity, fixed her with terrible gentleness.

“Because, lady, I am the voice you silenced. I am the cry you buried. Every pang you endured, every secret you smothered, I drank them into my being. And thus I am bound to you.”

Her knees weakened, and she clutched at her breast, the chamber spinning as though a veil of unreality descended. “Bound—to me?”

“Yes,” he whispered, advancing until his shadow swallowed hers. “You called me forth with your despair. For long have you languished, unseen by mortal eyes, unheard by mortal ears. But I saw you. I heard you. I have always been here.”

Tears, long imprisoned, welled hot upon her lashes. “Then tell me—are you my salvation, or my doom?”

He bent close, so near she could feel the icy breath of his words against her cheek.

“I am both.”

And as the moonlight guttered behind a cloud, she felt the walls of her solitude collapse—not into freedom, but into an embrace darker and more consuming than solitude itself.

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