Fiction logo

Sweet Obsession

A Tale of Obsession and Overlooked Purpose

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 21 days ago 1 min read
AI image generated by thauthor

A bake-off for the eyes, not the truths sitting quietly in the corner.

🍪

The smell of chocolate chips in Canberra's snowflake-graced town hall was sweet.

Cloying.

Accusing. 

Cookies marched to a precise line-up over long tables, their dark chocolate chips arranged in exact spaces in perfectly pressed dough.

That shaped the baker’s hearts in absolute symmetry - they HAD to get the taste of the cookies JUST SO.

A donation jar was a gracious sentient on a corner table, 

greeted, then ignored.

Because the chocolate chip dough had to rise to yeast perfection.

🍪🍪

The judges’ eyes swept with laser exactness over the cookie lines, their nods synchronous- the cookies had to grace the sides of the moulds, with no hint of space. 

The fingers of bakers pressed into dough with near-obsessive force, the thumps of their hearts orchestrating as they eradicate each offensive lump within. 

Their eyes fell quickly on the donation jar.

That sighed, unnoticed. 

🍪🍪🍪

The day of the great chocolate chip bake-off dawned, grey clouds masking sunlight. 

People entered Canberra Hall in droves, greeting the immaculate cookie lines with polite applause. 

The sound of the claps fell hollowly on the floor.

The donation jar stood on a table in the corner, a consummate wallflower observing the proceedings. 

The guests passed it without glance or greeting. 

🍪🍪🍪🍪

The day ended, success resounding from the walls of the hall. 

Dusk fell with discoloured red hues. 

The cookies were gone.

The donation jar peered keenly from the shadows. 

🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪

For Mikeydred's December prompt.

MicrofictionShort Story

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (6)

Sign in to comment
  • Mother Combs15 days ago

    💖

  • Pamela Williams20 days ago

    Another profound piece, Michelle. Love it.

  • Fathi Jalil21 days ago

    Liew Tsui-Lin, the way you described that lonely donation jar... whyyy is it so sad? 🥺 People get so obsessed with perfection that they forget the actual purpose. Such a deep message hidden in cookies! 🍪💔

  • Lana V Lynx21 days ago

    Such a wonderful story, Michelle! You are definitely cracking the Christmas code, bringing holiday cheer through your storytelling.

  • Oh nooo, now I really wanna have some chocolate chip cookies hehehehehe

  • Mariann Carroll21 days ago

    Now, its time for me to eat Chocolate Chip cookies 🍪 😋 😉

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.