Strangely Preserved
Barely Fiction
I am like a room, forgotten
sealed up and locked away
With a reputation, ill gotten
absorbing blame, until decay
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I am like a room, discarded
traded for something more
The doors, always intensely guarded
keyless locks, upon the door
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I am like a room, neglected
of no use to anyone
The useful in me, long since, dissected
with new stories already spun
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I am like a room, abandoned
vines growing thick, upon the walls
Nearly empty, newly dismantled
the perfect fool to take the fall
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I am like a room, omitted
new words to fit the current mood
Too late now, to be acquitted
the scene suggests, how I am viewed
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I am like a room, pretermit
the seal continuously renewed
For sins that no one dares admit
to make abandonment, construed
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I am like a room, untrespassed
no one breaks the barricade
tightly sealed with plaster cast
having been wanting, measured and weighed
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I am like a room, no one wants
windows boarded, do not enter
Still I remain here, nonchalant
grief and pains,' point, epicenter
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I am like a room, that's lost
out of sight and out of mind
I am the line that can't be crossed
inside this door I hide behind
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I am like a room, demolished
no remorse, when beat upon
A one time prize, that's left unpolished
one day here, the next, I'm gone
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I am like a room, vacated
the things of worth, were stripped, like gold
What remained, gladly donated
covered now with dust and mold
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I am like a room, that has been overlooked
frozen in a place of invisibility
Filled with air, consuming, cranny and nook
caught in a complex simile
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I am like a room, fully exposed to lonely
where life and its desire is cut apart
Plain and unpretentious, some might call, homely
dissected and missing my heart
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I am like a room, relinquished
all my strength wasted and gone
The joy in me has been extinguished
an empty room, devoid of home
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I am like a room, rejected
packed away and left to rot
A virus spreading an infection
a sudden and severe onslaught
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I am like a room that's damaged
no return, beyond repair
In disarray, after the ravage
as empty as a vacant stare
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I am like a room, that's vacant
left alone, unoccupied
Still waiting and hopeful, one day, be awakened
throw open the blinds and welcome the light
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I am like a room, forsaken
Caught in a web of hurt and lies
Encouraging some conversation
erase the past with another try
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I am like a room, left in the lurch
without help when needed most
A sinner turned away from church
a prisoner whose guard has left his post
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I am just a room, vacated
holding no power, wishing no ill will
From this home I am castrated
but there is time for healing, still
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It's not too late to make the changes
we're not condemned to stay this course
All it would take is some rearranging
cleanse the walls of past remorse
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Break down the door and let the light in
pull down the blinds, that made us blind
Cleanse the heart, forgive the sinner
apply some love and change your mind
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This room can bring life to the whole house
gather near and light the fire
Nurture the seedlings, watching them sprout
reaching the goals that you desire
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Until this house becomes a home
and each room offers peace and love
A little paint and the pain is gone
(maybe not "gone", but surely, better.) Until it fits you like a glove
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (8)
The use of repetition is impactful
Well-wrought and accolades well-deserved!
Your imagery is vivid and consistent throughout. Each room feels like a different facet of the human heart.
VEry creative lines. congrats on your top story. well deserved @ Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Stunning! May the door be broken down and the light let in. Congratulations on your top story
Congratulations on your Top Story, Kelli. A very unique approach to the challenge to create a story in a poem (but not your first 😉😉) Well done!!
Oooo, pretermit is a new word for me. This was such a creative take on the challenge and I loved it. Congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
What an epic ode to hearth and home and to oneself. Good job and Happy Thanksgiving.