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Sensational

Five senses

By Farinmade Martha Published 3 years ago 3 min read
Sensational

1 - VISION

Making the air so keen and strange

The stars so bright fiercely

The necks of time, the tides of change are nothing in his sight .

What if the best things are out of sight, hidden away and so cannot be apprehended by the sense of sight .

2 - SMELL

Some day if your nose should “ GET ON A TEAR “ and cease doing business and shut out the AIR , to exclude from its presence

A strong - smelling pair ,

Would u keep your mouth shut

ome day if your nose should “ GET ON A TEAR “ and cease doing business and shut out the AIR , to exclude from its presence

A strong - smelling pair ,

Would u keep your mouth shut

3 - HEAR

Saying that now you are not as you were when you had changed from the one who has all to me

Women much missed , how you call to me , saying that now you are not as you were when you had changed from the one who has all to me

But as at first , when our day was fair .

Can it be you that I hear “ , let me view you then standing as when I drew near to the tow

Where you would wait for me , yes as I knew u then

Even to the original air - blue gown .

Hearing the varied Carol voice singing

Those of mechanics , each one sing - ing his / hers as it should be blithe and strong ,

The carpenter singing his as he measures his plank or beam .

The mason singing his as he makes ready for work or leaves for work .

( exuberantly full of joy and energy but does not simultaneously - sentimentalist all of these trades .

4 - TASTE / TONGUE

Have you ever stood outside On a cold and windy day .

And felt what the wind tastes like

As it moves along its way ?

Have you tasted wind in the summer

( Hot and sticky in your throat . . Cold and flowy )

I am 2 - guys deep since yours .

And I am sitting here with your taste in my mouth ,

The taste of smoke and strawberries

The taste of the times we spent together the whole day

Learning each other’s touch .

5 - TOUCH / FEEL

Looks o’er the world and can find nothing such as which they claim from those lights the name of the best

The windows now through which this is heavenly guest .

Of TOUCH they are , that without touch doth touch , which Cupid’s self , from Beauty’s mind did draw :

Of touch they are and poor I am their straw .

{ Loved and still loves but cannot have , I can , if I like , look but can not TOUCH }

NOW - IN ALL BEING TEXTED . . .

They send me spinning while in my five SENSES

All sounds and silences all shapes and color as thread for that weaver, whose web within me growing follows beyond my knowing

Some patterns sprung from nothing

A rhythm that dances and isn’t mine

Now my five senses gather into a meaning

All acts , presence and as a lily gathers the elements together in me this dark and shining

These shapes and colors that spring from nothing and something becomes a rhythm that dances before me .

SENSATIONAL

Goes by the five senses

Thank You For Reading

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About the Creator

Farinmade Martha

I am a student in Africa, having an interest in art broadly, also trying to struggle my way out of situations and using all means by putting interests to work. I hope you all try to help read and I’m also hoping to learn more. Thank you

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