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How can one lose their mind when it's been stolen.

By Natalia HermosillaPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

The putrid smell wafted over to Ronald's side of the room again. Nasty. Foul.

Ronald wanted to scream at this man. Tell him to mind his own and bugger off. He could after all. This man wasn't bound with canvas and duck cloth and buckles.

He'd seen him once before. Hadn't he? The loose oily locks of hair and black bagged eyes sitting atop a birds beak of a nose placed him somewhere in Ronald's memory.

The man started showing more often. Each time looking more like the pale rider of death himself.

He never responded. Only ever stared. Getting closer with each visit. The stench, unbearable.

"FUCK OFF YOU MANGY CREEP! I'LL KILL YOU! I'LL FUCKEN KILL YOU! NASTY! FOUL!" Ronald exploded, lashing about within his confines.

"There! He's there!! Can't you see him? He's right there you fucks!" he cried as the room filled with white coats.

"Nurse Wells, increase the chlorpromazine to 700mg please. Administer olanzapine first."

"No... stop... please look. Just look," he dribbled out as his consciousness was slowly robbed from him. His sensibilities softened; the image of the man wavered like heatwaves rising from asphalt. Wits stolen from his own self, Ronald succumbed willingly.

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About the Creator

Natalia Hermosilla

I'm a sponge absorbed past its limit. Spilling out messy droplets of inspiration, life experience and untamed imagination. Overly saturated in ideas I still soak despite the sensation of drowning. This is my endeavor. My love.

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