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Motive, means, but what about the opportunity

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished about 9 hours ago 1 min read

How about that Taylor character, Jenkins?”

“Taylor? Well… he certainly had a motive.”

“Yeah, victim grassed him up for that bank job.”

“An’ ‘e ‘as previous for fancy knife work.”

“He certainly has. Only one problem…”

“Yeah, he’s banged up. 18 stretch in Frankland High Security.”

“Wasn’t he out on compassionate, for his mother’s funeral?”

“Yes, guv, but under escort.”

“No matter. It’s enough to question him. He has friends on the out. Could’ve put out a contract. Call up that Percy in Legal. Tell the posh bastard I want a warrant to question Raymond George Taylor, suspicion of murder.”

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Just FYI, this author's middle name is not George and I have never served a stretch in HMP Frankland...

My inside time was spent at HMP Pentonville in London.

This Drabble, a story in 100 words, was originally written for the Facebook Group: Writers Unite!

How to write a story in 100 words or less

Originally written for Writers Unite! Facebook Gro

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Lana V Lynxabout 7 hours ago

    Oh, and now I wanna know what happens next!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 9 hours ago

    Oh thank God it isn't you hahahahahaha. Loved this!

  • Nicely written ❤️ 👌 Great Job...

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