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'A Knock at the Door' Challenge

By Kendall Defoe Published 2 years ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Anna Hill on Unsplash

Hello? Hello...?

Do you want your snow cleared?

It really came down hard last night and we know that you need a little help to keep the driveway and sidewalk clear...

It is still pretty early and we can be out of here in about one hour. You have such a big place that it is going to take a while for all of us to clear all of it for you and maybe put down something (there's ice underneath and we almost fell).

Sorry, I should tell you that me and my two brothers came by because we needed to see if anyone in the neighbourhood wanted us clearing things for them before the plow passed and the driveway got blocked. I don't think you want that, or for anyone to blame you for falling on your property (like I said, we almost fell and we want to make sure that it never happens to anyone else this week). We even brought something to put down (better than salt and it won't wreck your van at all; you should have put it in the garage).

Sorry to be like this, but we are going to see if your neighbours are around if you don't say anything. Most of them are gone and we are the only ones around. They didn't clear their snow, either. They are all gone.

They are all away now.

It is probably a good idea to avoid any accidents.

You should really clear your snow.

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Kendall Defoe

Teacher, reader, writer, dreamer... I am a college instructor who cannot stop letting his thoughts end up on the page. No AI. No Fake Work. It's all me...

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  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Are those the neighbors that went away or are they you guys or....oh this pic is phenomenal. I love the drama...chuckle and hahahah.

  • Mark Gagnon2 years ago

    The story kept me reading till the end, but that picture is phenomenal!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Dharrsheena nailed it! You combined a sense of kindness and charity with a creep factor that slowly built over the course of the story. Really, exceptional writing, Kendall! The creepy snowman pic is a hoot!😜

  • Hahahahahahhahaha that photo caught me off guard!! Such kind hearted and creepy men 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • D. J. Reddall2 years ago

    Creepily Canadian!

  • Randy Baker2 years ago

    Good to know there are still helpful folks out there looking to lend a hand. Nice approach to the challenge!

  • Such nice young men. How much do you charge? Love the picture!

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