Reaching the Edge of the Universe
My first Science fiction Story

Max Lane lay unconscious in his laboratory, utterly spent after countless unsuccessful attempts. His laboratory is located in the middle of a dense dark forest. It is almost impossible for humans to enter here.
For the last twenty years, he has been working on a project through which humans can survive in the vacuum outside the earth without any technical aid. His only dream is to "swim in the universe and reach its final edge." He has spent the last twenty years of his life in his small laboratory and this dense dark forest.

uddenly, his hand hit something, and a deep blue light spread in the laboratory with a loud sound. The sound was so loud that Dr. Max Lane woke up. As soon as he opened his eyes, he saw blue light spreading all around the room. He found himself in the middle of a blue circle.
Max searched around to find his glasses, he came out of his laboratory while adjusting his glasses.
"Dr. Max Lane saw an amazing sight in front of his eyes, he saw "A huge blue circle was hovering around him. Which had almost surrounded this entire forest. In it, all the elements present on the earth were mixed under a complex process. Important gases like oxygen, carbon dioxide, hydrogen and nitrogen, water vapor, ozone, etc., and gravitational and magnetic fields were being formed. In front of Max's eyes, a huge surface started forming from small particles, in which blue sky and small rivers started flowing.
"I did it. Finally, I did something." Dr. Max Lane shouted happily. His machine had been activated.
His experiment was completely successful. His idea was that "he would mix all the elements present on earth, air, fire, water, land, sky and create an environment which would be exactly like the earth. A solid surface like the earth, a sky above, water, all the gases, an ozone layer to protect from ultraviolet rays, gravitational force, magnetic field, etc., all the essential life needs would be present in it.
Which he could take wherever he wanted. Even in the deserted universe outside the Earth. Its complete control was in his hands. He was the master of his little earth.
Suddenly, he felt as if the ground was bursting. And he felt as if he was floating in the air. Then a loud sound echoed in the forest and blue light spread all around in the sky. And with a very big explosion, the huge forest there, Dr. Max's laboratory, and Dr. himself. had disappeared from there.
Now only a huge pit was left at that place. The forests, animals, birds, small rivers, and waterfalls were now floating in the sky like a huge balloon.
In a few moments, he came out of the Earth's orbit, tearing through the clouds and the Earth's atmosphere.
Max found himself alone in a vast void with his small beautiful world. Dr. Max Lane was filled with excitement and pride.
In this deep black universe, where there was no possibility of life anywhere, a blue light point, looking like a microscopic particle, was floating in that desolate vacuum. In which life exists in a visible form.
Suddenly, he felt as if some invisible force was pulling him towards it. His machine almost stopped working and he was continuously flowing fast in one direction. Dr. Max Lane thought that maybe this was happening due to the gravitational force of the moon, and he was being pulled towards the moon.
But after some time, he realized that he was trapped in big trouble. He thought that he must have come under the grip of some powerful alien beings.
Suddenly an unbelievable incident happened in front of him. He saw that some creatures looking like alien beings were standing around him. By looking at them, it could be guessed that they did not belong to any species of humans or the earth. They were aliens.
Their bodies were completely white and transparent. A bright red circle was hovering behind their heads. Their size was twice that of a human. They appeared as if they were made of mist.
Suddenly a red wave hit Dr. Max Lane's head, which made him realize that he was entering his brain. And this could be their way of communicating.
After a few moments, that wave disappeared. But once again, those waves hit his brain; this time, a voice echoed in Max's brain, "Hey, wonderful creature, we are the residents of the planet Glaceria. We know that you have come from Earth, we now have all the information about your planet and your existence. Will you make a deal with us?
"What kind of deal? I don't understand anything!" Max said to himself in response.
"Hand over all the liquid you have to us. In return, we will give you such a power that you will be able to float in this vacuum universe like us. You will not even need this planet. And your existence will never end. No one in this universe will be able to see you except the inhabitants of the planet Glaceria. Unless you choose to be visible yourself. You will become immortal forever.
“When Max heard this, his happiness knew no bounds, and he made this agreement with the residents of Glaceria.
“After a few moments, Max's body became as transparent as theirs, and a red circle started hovering behind his head. All the blood and fluid from his body had disappeared. Max was very happy to get his new and endless life.
“Max comes out of his small world and enters the dark and desolate universe.
He was floating in the universe now. In no time, he disappeared from there and got lost in the endless reacheth the stubbornness. To reach the end of the universe.
The residents of Glaceria took his small world with them.
About the Creator
Karan w.
Lost in a world where peace is blue
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Comments (6)
such an incredible fiction!
Brother I lost my diary which had more than all the poems that I'd posted!! I thought I had it... All my poems are lost that I hadn't posted yet!
What an awesome fiction story! well done
Aww, awesome buddy. You are really cinematic creative write bro keep it up bro...you are going to next level creation of science fiction bro .. hats 📴 to you.. i wish you all the best bro .
Very imaginative, original and captivating. I can't and will not believe that this is your first sci-fi story. I loved every bit of this, the details, the flow of the events and it's length. I just couldn't stop reading.
Amazing brother! You would be glad to know that "space" is my second love! I just love everything about space and universe. I am an absolute space lover. The way you've put small details in the story like the number of gases and then the size of their heads make this story like it's being played in the cinema on big screens ✨🤩 Which makes it even more interesting to read plus when I realised what an amazing concept you've given by stating that he wanted to create an atmosphere and basically everything that earth has' is so spellbinding. And I was queer to see what he would do for the aliens demand! They way you coped the story is amazing.