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Private Lives, Total Cost

Total Privacy Comes At A Cost.

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 2 min read
Private Lives, Total Cost
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Total privacy comes at a price.

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May Long and David Sim were the IT couple—awash with glitz, drowned in glamour, and flooded by paparazzi camera lights.

Their holiday—turquoise waves lapping the shore—was more than well-deserved.

The coastal villa of Amalfi spread out in its magnificence as their superyacht kissed the shoreline, its shadows covering the edges.

The couple had a reputation for ignoring fans--they needed the help May had promised in her posts.

The couple's relationship thrived beyond the camera's lens—and not with the chatty vibes of the Enquirer.

The paparazzi caught on—long before they could fold their tripods. Their Tik Tok photos came to life--when they didn't know. 

May's photos on TikTok recorded more than May and David—they captured long shadows, their subtle movement teasing the edges.

Shadows traipsed through the villa's long hallways, dark forms that should have been filed away long ago.

The secluded beach and opulent resort were perfect private trappings for the millionaire couple—they could record kisses and take private selfies to mark their romance.

At least, for two weeks.

Until small oddities reared their dark heads.

Shadows lagged behind their reflections, movements slightly out of sync. Others extended what seemed to be arms, reaching toward them with unheard pleas.

The discomfort triggered May, who recorded the strange movements on camera—disembodied shadows dancing before the lens. They appeared again in reposts on social media by her enthusiastic fans.

The comments grew stranger.

“May, the mirror in your room was in a different place last night,” said one.

As the comments grew, so did the villa—rising and moving in tandem with the shadows, each pair engaged in a disembodied dance.

A storm disrupted their Amalfi adventure—the villa’s architecture twisted in contortions that would make a vine blush. It wasn’t alone in doing the twist.

A pale hand.

Blue veins—varicose.

Fingernails—too long.

A moving shadow that wasn’t hers—or David’s.

A single touch—felt, but unseen.

The walls of the bedroom became a canvas for a digital landscape—Amalfi Villa on the wall.

Overgrown with creepers.

The backlight of May’s mobile came on—and out it stepped.

The couple sat up in bed, jaws dropped.

It stood in full view, in May’s favourite red dress. Hair just as long.

But—too pale.

“You wanted privacy—those kisses on your phone? Not for TikTok or Instagram? They come at a cost.”

A snicker. May's mouth rounded in a scream that wouldn't sound. David's fingers found the bed's headboard.

"I'm the guardian of your secrets—every private smile, kiss, and gesture. Each time you have one, I see it. Even if no one else does."

"And the price of those secrets?"

A sweep of her fingers, and May's TikTok profile filled the bedroom wall from floor to ceiling.

Number of fans—zero.

Villa Amalfi was calm—waters a perfect pastel blue.

May's TikTok profile lit her screen—with more pictures of herself and David.

At restaurants, simply savoring foie gras with the family.

Her comments?

Warm—but controlled.

To members of a growing fanbase.

Would you pay that price for privacy?

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Original story by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

Short StoryHorror

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran5 months ago

    Oh my, that was soooo creeepppyyyy! Also, I'm curious. Why do you use -- in some places but — in some? Like is there a difference?

  • Andy Potts5 months ago

    Nicely done. Very atmospheric, and it took me in an unexpected direction. I likely enjoyed it more as a grumpy old man with no time for Insta-culture as well! Thanks :-)

  • Sandy Gillman5 months ago

    Mixing the glitz of celebrity life with the horror of shadows and surveillance is such a clever twist.

  • Andrea Corwin 5 months ago

    Michelle, this is such a great description! 'superyacht kissed the shoreline' So you mean that since she wanted it private, this "creature" wiped her profile and made her start over? I apologize for my confusion.

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