Please Come In
A room forgotten
Please Come In
The forgotten room was quiet now.
It sat at the far end of a long, dim hallway inside a place no architect had ever drawn, and no human foot had ever stepped inside. The walls were wallpapered with memory, peeling at the edges, some corners bright as sunlight, others shadowed with dust. A shag carpet from the 1970’s covered the floor in bold burnt-orange swirls. A stack of vinyl records leaned against one wall, a Polaroid camera hung from a hook by the door, and an old concert wristband lay curled like a dried leaf on the dresser.
This room was warm. It smelled faintly of cedar and lemon oil and something sweeter: maybe lilac perfume, or the breath of youth.
And though no one had entered the room in years, Patricia lived inside it still.
She sat in her favorite rocking chair—maple, worn smooth on the arms from decades of use. She listened to the voices drifting through the walls. Outside the room, reality buzzed like fluorescent lights in a hallway. She could hear them: her children, her grandchildren. They spoke over her, around her, as though she were a ghost.
She wished they would open the door.
She wished they knew it existed.
In the physical world, far from her forgotten room, Patricia lay propped in a narrow nursing-home bed, white sheets tucked neatly around her thin frame. Her eyes were half-open, clouded but alert. Her breath came soft and slow. Electrolyte drink in a plastic cup. A cartoon on a muted television she couldn’t see. The faint click of an IV pump.
Her four children gathered around her like planets orbiting a star they believed had gone cold.
“Doctor says she’s barely here,” said Matthew, the oldest, his voice low but not low enough.
“She hasn’t spoken in weeks,” murmured Elena, twisting her wedding ring. “I don’t think she even knows we’re here.”
The grandchildren hovered behind them, bored and uncomfortable, thumb-tapping unseen screens, shifting weight from foot to foot. They had been brought for moral reasons: Let them say goodbye. But none knew what to do in the presence of someone they believed had already left.
Inside the forgotten room, Patricia pressed her palms against the walls.
I hear you.
I’m right here.
I wish you could see.
But they could not hear her. Not through the dimming of her body, not through the years of unasked questions, not through the noise of their own distractions.
And so Patricia did what she always did: she opened the little drawers of her memory and took inventory of her treasures.
The room shimmered, brightening as she breathed in. The walls rippled like film changing scenes.
Suddenly she was seventeen again.
Hot July night. A rock concert in a humid outdoor amphitheater. Jimi Hendrix blasting from giant speakers. Her hair long, blond, braided with daisies. She was pressed shoulder-to-shoulder with a sea of swaying bodies. Music thundered in her ribs, her bones, her heartbeat.
She remembered buying the ticket with money saved from babysitting, stuffing herself into denim shorts and a hand-painted T-shirt. Her mother had scolded her for “running with the wild crowd,” but Patricia had laughed; bold, alive, electric.
She could still feel the bass vibrating through her fingertips as she clapped. Could still feel the hand of her best friend, Krissy, tugging her closer to the stage. Could still hear the shouts, the laughter, the unrestrained thrill of being young in a world that felt like it was just beginning.
In the nursing home room, Matthew said, “She never told us much about her teenage years.”
“No,” Elenae said, “she was always private. Quiet.”
Patricia wanted to laugh. Quiet?
If only they knew.
She closed her eyes, and the concert dissolved, replaced by…
Camping trip. 1974.
The forgotten room filled with the hum of cicadas and the rustle of pine needles. A faded blue tent popped into existence in the corner. A campfire crackled, casting dancing light against the walls.
She saw her father, tall and gentle, teaching her how to thread a fishing line. “Patience, Patti,” he’d said, tapping her wrist. “Fish can sense frustration.” He’d winked. “They’re like boys.”
She grinned, remembering.
She remembered falling asleep to the sound of crickets, wrapped in a sleeping bag patterned with bright yellow stars. She remembered waking with dew in her hair. She remembered marshmallows burning into sticky black lumps because she’d always held them too close to the flame.
But she remembered the laughter most; the endless, uncomplicated laughter of a family she missed more than any of her children realized.
Outside, in the real room, one of her grandsons whispered, “Did Nana ever, like, do outdoorsy stuff?”
“Your grandmother?” John chuckled. “No. Not really.”
Patricia pressed her hand to her chest.
Yes, she wanted to say.
Oh, yes, I did.
The room brightened to the color of campus sunlight.
Brick buildings, grassy courtyards, the smell of coffee and new textbooks. A track field with chalk lines. She ran the 400 meters like fire fueled her legs, her hair tied high, her breath sharp and fierce. Her coach yelling, “Drive, Patti! Drive!”
She tasted sweat and victory again.
Krissy sprinted beside her, competitive and giggling even as they pushed themselves.
Later, nights sprawled on dorm room floors, legs tangled in blankets, music from Fleetwood Mac drifting through cracked windows. Sharing secrets at 2 a.m., dreaming about the future: careers, marriages, independence, travel. The whole world felt like a map they could fold and unfold at will.
She had been bold then. Hungry. More than a mother. More than a wife. More than the frail body lying silent in a too-clean bed.
But no one in the room beside her knew these pieces.
No one had asked.
And now they thought it was too late to learn.
The forgotten room dimmed. Shades of rose and sepia colored the air.
Her first marriage appeared like an old reel-to-reel film playing in a corner. Mark, tall, dark-haired, kind. The man who had given her the first two children. He was patient, steady, gentle. He smelled of sawdust and laundry soap and Sunday mornings.
She remembered their wedding: daisies in her hair, a guitar trio playing instead of an organ, vows that made her giggle through happy tears. She remembered their first apartment. It was rented, tiny, with avocado-green carpet and a kitchen barely big enough for two.
They had argued about money. They had made up in whispers. They had grown together, then slowly apart, like trees leaning in different directions. Not violently. Just inevitably.
He had loved her, and she had loved him, but life had pulled their seams loose.
Then…
Michael.
Her second husband.
Oh, how her heart still fluttered at the memory.
Loud laughter, silver hair even in his twenties, a motorcycle, an unpredictable streak that made her feel nineteen again. He had taken her on cross-country road trips. They danced barefoot in garages. They argued passionately, loved passionately, and lived passionately.
He had given her her youngest child, Joh.n, the one now standing quietly at the foot of the bed, eyes watery.
John touched Margaret’s hand. “I wish I’d asked you more, Mom,” he whispered softly.
Patricia’s’s heart swelled.
You still can, she wished she could reply.
The room is still here.
Your father, Michael, died too young; a heart attack at forty-six. She remembered collapsing in the kitchen when she got the call. She remembered the way the world went gray for years afterward.
These were the stories she longed to tell.
These were the pages unwritten.
Back in the forgotten room, the walls flickered. Something was changing.
The voices outside grew softer. Closer. Warmer.
Elena had moved to her bedside. “Mom… I don’t know if you can hear me, but… we love you.” Her voice trembled. “We should’ve asked you more. I know that now.”
Patricia blinked.
A light appeared near the door of the forgotten room; golden, pulsing like a heartbeat. It had never opened before, not once. Not in all the months she’d been trapped within her silent body.
She stood and approached it.
The door cracked open an inch.
From outside the room, she heard her eldest grandchild say, “I wish we knew more about her life before us. We barely know anything.”
Another voice: “Mom, what was she like when she was young?”
And from Elena, quietly, “She was more than we ever understood.”
The door glowed brighter.
Finally.
Finally.
Patricia stepped toward the light, unsure if she would be walking out or welcoming them in.
As she touched the door, the forgotten room expanded; walls stretching, opening outward like a blooming flower. Memory washed through her: music, trees, sweat on a track field, kisses in a garage, the sticky sweetness of burnt marshmallows.
Her life, whole and vivid.
On the nursing-home bed, a tear rolled from the corner of her eye.
John gasped. “She heard us.”
The grandchildren froze.
Matthew leaned close. “Mom? Can you hear us?”
Her fingers twitched.
It was small, but unmistakable.
Hope filled the physical room, swelling like breath.
Inside the forgotten room, the door opened fully at last.
And her children; adults who had suddenly become children again, stood there in the doorway. Not physically, not entirely, but through memory, through love, through acknowledgment.
They were not entering to stay.
But they were finally looking in.
And that was enough.
Patricia walked through the door.
Not away.
But toward them.
As she crossed the threshold, the forgotten room did not vanish. It expanded, spreading like sunlit water, blending memory with presence. For the first time in years, she felt whole; seen, recognized, held by the echoes of a lifetime.
Her children leaned close, speaking to her now, not around her. The grandchildren moved nearer, eyes wide, sensing something sacred happening.
“Tell us, Mom,” Elena whispered, tears dropping onto the blanket. “Tell us somehow… who you were.”
And though Patricia’s lips did not move, though no sound passed her throat, the room glowed with the full brightness of her life, and something in the air shifted. It was soft, warm, unmistakable.
They felt her story.
Even if they would never know every detail, they knew its weight, its colors, its music.
They knew her.
Patricia’s last breath was quiet, calm, and full of light.
The forgotten room finally opened, and as she stepped through to whatever waited beyond, she carried with her the knowledge that she had been seen in the end.
That her story had not been entirely lost.
That love…belated, imperfect, human…had bridged the distance.
And the forgotten room, now empty of its longtime occupant, glowed with one final burst of golden memory…
…before gently closing its door.
About the Creator
Patti Marrs Magill
Retired Corporate Flight Attendant, pursuing new careers in writing and education. I have 4 adult children, 6 grandchildren, and live in Central California. Currently I am taking on students to tutor in reading and writing.


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