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Cloud

By TerrencePublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 3 min read
draft for mental ability visuals (comic)

As the wind from Bulls Eye’s magical blow started to roar violently in a massive circle . It started to build up like a small twister . Suddenly the mist was being rapidly blown away . At once , our enemies were finally spotted ! The first thing that I noticed was that I was right about my first hunch . The fish guy was falling to the ground when our bat enemies caught him in the knick of time . I saw the last bits of cloud that got blown away . Our fish enemy was riding on a cloud in the mist ! They were tracking us using our sounds that we made with our feet . The loud sounds I described before , of us sloshing around . While they were primarily while being silent in the air themselves . The bat guy using his wings that made no sound when he flapped . The fish guy somehow creating a cloud to float on using water magic . It's a frightening strategy to have to deal with , but we have no choice .

They flew high in the air for a small moment and then came back down at blazing speeds . Ravaging the ground again using the fish enemies high pressure magic water attack . We sprinted as fast as we could to dodge the attack . We learned the hard way before that just dodging his attacks weren't enough . The strategy is to continually move while dodging . I told Bulls Eye , “ Send me straight to the fish guy “ . He marked our enemy first , and then he marked my drill with his laser . I held on very tight as my life depended on it and then I activated my weapon's drill mode . When he yelled match I was sent flying straight through the water attack using both my drill and his magic . I headed straight into my fish enemies head killing him in an instant . The bat guy let out a yell before getting some distance from what just occurred .

After that I was falling to the ground . That was more risky than usual . I started thinking to myself maybe this is it . Then during the same time as I was falling , something even worse happened . The bat guy was coming at me full speed with his sword drawn to attack me . He was planning on taking advantage of me as I fell . More importantly he was coming to get me for revenge !

Right when his sword was inches away from me an arrow disarmed him . Bulls Eye's arrow came flashing through the air and knocked his word flying away from him . After that I was froze in mid air . He landed on top of me , for a brief moment we were floating awkwardly and wrestled each other . I'm not that good at fighting but I'm descent at grappling . I put him in a firm headlock when we were suddenly sent dropping down to the ground again . I let go of the bat guy being more concerned with my safe landing . John came and caught me while our enemy was left to fall . In the midst of us fighting I forgot he was a bat person and he caught himself last second with his wings . Making a safe landing . Match ! Was the only audible thing we all heard before seeing an arrow sticking through the bat guys face !

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Terrence

Releasing an ongoing online book called Zaigon. If you are new here I strongly reccomend you start reading from page 1(the oldest). Comic located at www.patreon.com/zaigon. Merch at https://digishoppe.creator-spring.com/listing/comic-zaigon

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