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Phoenix and Albatross - the tale of two wings

Ep 2: Eternal look

By Jay VPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
The eternal look

As Sanam, Aslin, and Emir continued to wander through the art gallery, they came across a beautiful oil painting. Sanam stood in front of the painting, admiring its intricate details and rich colors. But, as she looked closer, she noticed something peculiar about the brushstrokes.

"This painting is a mess!" Sanam exclaimed, chuckling to herself.

Her friends, Aslin and Emir, immediately burst into laughter. They had known Sanam for years and were used to her sassy and humorous nature. However, her comments about the painting, which was displayed in a prominent location, caused a stir among the other guests at the exhibition.

Sanam, oblivious to the attention she was attracting, continued to make fun of the painting. "I mean, who would pay for this kind of art? It's like a 5-year-old with a paintbrush got ahold of a canvas."

Aslin and Emir chuckled even harder, enjoying their friend's wit. However, little did they know, the artist of the painting was standing just a few feet away, listening to every word that Sanam was saying.

Jan, the talented artist who had earned recognition and success for his unique style, felt his heart drop as he heard Sanam's insensitive remarks. Despite his success, he was sensitive about his work and took criticism to heart. Sanam's comments had struck a chord with him and he was left feeling deflated and embarrassed.

As Sanam and her friends continued to wander through the art gallery, admiring the various paintings on display, Sanam suddenly felt a tap on her shoulder. She turned around to find herself face to face with the artist of the painting she had just made a snarky comment about. At first, she was taken aback, not realizing that the person in front of her was actually the artist, Jan.

Jan was a successful and talented artist, known for his unique style, but also sensitive about his work. He had taken Sanam's snarky comment about his painting to heart and had come to confront her. As he stood in front of Sanam, his eyes met hers and they both felt an instant spark of attraction.

Sanam was completely caught off guard by the intense gaze that Jan was giving her. She had never met anyone with such piercing eyes before. The look in his eyes was almost magnetic, drawing her in and holding her gaze. She could feel herself falling under his spell, and she was powerless to resist.

Jan was about to say something, to confront Sanam about her comments, but the words got stuck in his throat as he got lost in her gaze. He had never felt anything like this before. Her sparkling eyes and charming smile had captured his heart and he couldn't take his eyes off her.

As they continued to stare into each other's eyes, time seemed to stand still. It was as if the entire world had disappeared and it was just the two of them, lost in their own private moment of connection.

And so, the story of Jan and Sanam unfolds, a story of albatross and phoenix, of two people from different worlds who found each other and discovered that anything is possible when you have someone to share it with. This was just the beginning of a journey that would change both of their lives forever.

As they continued to navigate their relationship, they encountered many challenges, but they always managed to find their way back to each other, and they realized that their love was unbreakable. No matter what obstacles they faced, they always had each other's backs, and they both knew that they had found the missing piece they had been searching for.

"Phoenix and Albatross - the tale of two wings" is a tale of two people who found love in the unlikeliest of places, and it was a story that would be told for generations to come.

Love

About the Creator

Jay V

An aspiring writer who wish to leave a mark in history...

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