Out Like a Lion
Snow Micro Challenge
The crisp night air cooled my disappointment. Snow was falling more thickly than when I arrived at Taft Hall, only to find that Public Safety had canceled the March event due to weather. My dorm was just a five-minute walk, so I declined their offer to stay.
The campus was unnervingly still. The ground stopped crunching beneath my boots, falling silent under a deepening white blanket. The cold began to bite. I pulled my knit cap tighter and wrapped my scarf over my mouth and nose. Putting my hands in my pockets, I hunched my shoulders and continued stepping through starless winter.
The wind picked up. So did my heart rate as blinding snow pelted me from every direction. I squinted into the storm, tasting my fear like rust in my chattering teeth. I couldn’t see my dorm anymore. There were no shadowy shapes of trees or buildings to give me bearing. Just whistling snow and ice in a kaleidoscope of grey, lulling me to sink down into its white noise and disappear.
Needles of ice kept me wakeful against the cold. I threw an arm over my face to protect my eyes. Huddling against the buffeting blasts, I trudged forward. I knew I had to keep walking.
Something bumped me. I grasped it convulsively. Several hands pulled me from the sucking wind into warmth. I shivered uncontrollably, hearing calls for blankets and hot coffee. Blinking, I recognized the room. Taft Hall, an hour after I had left.
About the Creator
Norreida Reyes
I've served as a public policy analyst, journalist & advocate for women & children. People have more power than they know. I see the world for what it is & still own joy & humor. Above all, I'm simply a writer, fortunate to do work I love.




Comments (7)
Snow storms can be so disorienting. This was well evoked.
Glad this ended well. Could have been mowed over by a snow truck. Dark thoughts, sorry. Very vivid images, great story.
Beautiful. Love it!
I loved the imagery in this piece. If I closed my eyes and the words played in the background, it’s as if I was right there! Nice work!
I kept seeing my daughter while reading your story! I was screaming, "Stay where you are!" Very realistic for this mama of a college freshman! Great writing! Good luck!
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Quick note: MS Word counted 250 words, but when I pasted it into Vocal, the platform showed I had 251, so I deleted a word. I assume I should use the Vocal platform's word count rather than MS Word. Must be differences in counting hyphenated words?