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On Our Wedding Night, My Bride Whispered a Curse She’d Been Saving for Love

On Our Wedding Night, My Bride Whispered a Curse She’d Been Saving for Love

By aneesPublished about 4 hours ago 3 min read

Marriage sealed the vow. Midnight sealed the curse.

By Anees Ul Ameen

They say the happiest night of your life is your wedding night.

That’s a lie people tell so they don’t have to talk about what really happens when love is bound too tightly.

The ceremony ended at sunset. Candles flickered. Music softened. Everyone said my wife, Zara, looked radiant—like something borrowed from a dream.

I noticed something else.

She never looked at the mirrors.

Not once.

By the time we reached the hotel, exhaustion wrapped around us like fog. We laughed, kicked off our shoes, collapsed onto the bed still half-dressed.

Zara sat up suddenly.

“Wait,” she said.

Her voice trembled—not nervous. Reverent.

“There’s something I need to do before midnight.”

I joked, “Another tradition?”

She didn’t smile.

“This one isn’t optional.”

She asked me to lock the door. Close the curtains. Turn off the lights.

Only the bedside lamp remained, painting the room in gold and shadow.

Zara knelt on the carpet.

I laughed again, uncomfortable. “You don’t need to—”

“This isn’t for you,” she said gently. “It’s for us.”

She removed her veil.

Underneath, her hair was braided with something dark and brittle.

I realized, too late, it was bone.

“Zara,” I whispered.

She pressed her palm to the floor.

The room answered.

Not with sound—but with pressure, like the walls leaned closer to listen.

“My family,” she said, “has loved badly for generations.”

The clock ticked louder.

“When we love, we bind. When we bind, we curse.”

I tried to stand.

My legs didn’t work.

She began to whisper—not to me, not to God—but to the space between breaths.

Words scraped against my ears, old and sharp. The lamp flickered.

The mirror across the room—one I swore hadn’t been there before—clouded over.

Something moved inside it.

“Zara, stop,” I begged.

She looked up then.

Her eyes were full of tears.

“I begged them to let me choose,” she said. “They said love is the choice.”

The clock struck 12:00 AM.

The mirror cracked.

Pain exploded behind my eyes.

Memories that weren’t mine poured in—weddings, funerals, screams muffled by silk sheets, vows whispered through blood.

I saw men like me.

All smiling.

All trapped.

Zara crawled to me.

“I’m sorry,” she whispered, kissing my shaking hands. “I really am.”

Her touch burned.

“Why me?” I gasped.

She rested her forehead against mine.

“Because you loved me without fear.”

The room changed.

The walls darkened, stretching higher. The bedposts twisted into something organic—veins, maybe roots. The air smelled like damp earth and roses left too long in water.

The mirror cleared.

Inside it, I saw us.

Older.

Still together.

Still smiling.

Never leaving.

I tried to scream.

My mouth filled with warmth.

Blood—or something like it—dripped onto the carpet, soaking into symbols I hadn’t noticed before.

The floor was marked.

Prepared.

Zara stood.

Her dress no longer white.

It breathed.

“You’ll get used to it,” she said softly. “They all do.”

The door handle rattled.

Someone—or something—knocked.

Once.

Twice.

Three times.

The mirror showed my parents standing outside the room.

Knocking.

Crying.

A future that would never reach me.

Zara climbed back onto the bed.

Pulled me close.

“I love you,” she said.

And I realized the curse wasn’t about pain.

It was about staying.

Forever.

The knocking stopped.

The clock melted.

The mirror sealed shut.

Now the nights repeat.

Always candlelight.

Always whispers.

Always her arms around me when the walls breathe.

Sometimes I still love her.

Sometimes love feels like a cage lined with silk.

And sometimes—when the mirror cracks just a little—

I see a new groom waiting.

Author’s Note

This story was written with the assistance of AI and carefully edited, revised, and finalized by Anees Ul Ameen to ensure originality, emotional resonance, and compliance with Vocal’s community guidelines.

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