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Olafagory

When mere memory about a smell can evoke the sensation of that smell.

By Alyssa ColleenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Olafagory
Photo by Duncan Kidd on Unsplash

The overgrown, golden plains of Northbridge were deafeningly silent as Sergeant James found solitude atop a hill. The wide emptiness around him mirrored the void within—a stark contrast to the chaos of the battles he had faced.

That deployment, laden with the ringing of gunshots, bombs, and cries of the fallen, seemed a lifetime away, and yet their memory was ever-present.

On this memorial evening, as the sunset bled into twilight, James was consumed by the recollection of one fateful hour. He could see the enemy, feel the weight of his rifle, and hear the ominous whistle of mortars overhead. But it was the smell that overcame him most powerfully—the acrid sting of gunpowder and the iron-rich scent of blood poured across the red dirt.

As the memory intensified, the very air around James seemed to change. The fresh, grassy perfume of the plains was replaced by the unmistakable stench of battle. Eyes tightly shut, it was as if he had been transported back to that day, standing once again amid smoke and chaos.

Feeling a rush of trepidation, he opened his eyes to prove to himself he was not back there, in hell.

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Alyssa Colleen

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  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Sad word...but very real. Very well done.

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I detest war and what it does to the ones who pay the price for the glory of those in charge. Yet, men keep enlisting, including some in my family. PTSD is so real and damaging. I can imagine the distress of recalling such horror amidst such beauty. Well done, great word.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    At least you did not use the suffix "-glory".

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