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Oh, Jeff... I love you, too... But

when in Rome

By BrenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Roy Lichtenstein, I love you but, 1964

"Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but...I'm still not giving you a blumpkin!"

my crack at for Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh, Jeff... I love you, too... But..." Challenge.

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Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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Nice work

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  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I had to look the word "blumpkin" up and according to the urban dictionary, I'm very sorry I did. But....brevity was accomplished!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Lol!! I wanna quote Meatloaf here but I won’t do that 🤪

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    The saddest story. 💩

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    That is definitely brief and to the point. 😂😂

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    I had to google that…I can never unknow that 😱🤢🤮💩 Besides the visual….quite an entry

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