
Chapter 1: The Room
He woke up on the floor.
Concrete beneath him. A faint hum in the walls. The scent of metal and mildew. No windows. One door. Slightly ajar.
The man didn’t remember entering the room. He didn’t remember anything at all—not his name, not his purpose, not even the last time he had eaten. Only the low pulse of unease threading through his body like a quiet alarm.
He stood up slowly, limbs stiff, throat dry. The room was dimly lit by a single bulb embedded in the ceiling, flickering in a rhythm that felt almost deliberate. Like a code.
The door was there. Open. But beyond it, only darkness. No sound, no wind, no hint of the outside world. Just a deeper shade of black. It wasn't a portal; it felt like a question.
And yet, the room behind him felt worse. As though something unseen lingered in the corners, watching. Waiting.
Chapter 2: The Corridor
He stepped out.
The hallway was long and sterile. Smooth grey walls. The air tasted of dust and static. No signs, no markings. Just overhead lights spaced every ten paces, each buzzing faintly. Footsteps echoed too loudly.
He walked.
The corridor split. Left or right.
He turned right.
Another hallway. Identical. And at the end—another room. Same as the first. Concrete. One door. Slightly ajar.
He turned back.
The corridor was gone. In its place, a blank wall.
He reached out to touch it. Cold. Solid. Real.
Chapter 3: The Voice
“Welcome,” said a voice.
It came from nowhere. It came from everywhere. Calm. Measured. Like someone reading instructions from behind glass.
“You are not lost. You are processing.”
“Processing what?” he asked, surprised by the sound of his own voice. It felt foreign, like a borrowed suit.
“You.”
He laughed, sharp and dry. “Is this a test?”
“Yes,” said the voice. “And also the result.”
“Of what?”
But silence followed.
Chapter 4: The Mirror Room
Eventually, he found a door that led to a room of mirrors. Every surface reflected him from strange angles. In some, he looked younger. In others, older. One version had no eyes. One didn’t move when he did.
He stared at a mirror that showed him standing still while his reflection paced nervously. Another showed him screaming—mouth open wide, silent.
“I don’t understand.”
“You’re not meant to,” the voice said. “Understanding ends the cycle.”
“Cycle?”
“Observation becomes insight. Insight becomes change. Change breaks the loop. The system does not permit change.”
“But why?”
Again, silence.
Chapter 5: The Rewind
He began to notice loops. The same scuff on the floor. The same flickering light. The same hesitation before he touched a doorknob. Repetitions that weren't just deja vu—they were fabric.
Each time he tried a different path, but the outcomes blurred. Time folded. One moment he was opening a door—next, waking on the floor again.
Same room. Same air. Same him.
Except not quite.
This time, the door was fully closed. A blinking red light above it. A keypad beside it he hadn’t seen before. And symbols he couldn’t read, but somehow understood.
Chapter 6: The Choice
He stopped walking. Sat down in the center of a hallway. The floor felt warmer now. Like something alive beneath it.
“If I can’t leave,” he said aloud, “what am I supposed to do?”
“You were never supposed to leave,” said the voice. “You were supposed to see.”
“See what?”
“That the exit isn’t where you think it is.”
The lights flickered. He noticed shadows cast from angles that didn’t make sense.
The door in front of him slid open slowly—no sound, no reason. Just another chance to walk through.
But this time, he didn’t.
He turned around.
And for the first time, saw a stairwell behind him. It spiraled downward.
Chapter 7: Descent
The stairs were narrow and steep. The further he descended, the more the air shifted. Colder. Wetter. The hum in the walls turned into a low whisper, like breathing.
Walls began to change. Cracks appeared. Old writing, etched into stone—layers of symbols, equations, sentences in broken languages.
He passed a door marked “EXIT.” He reached for it, but the knob turned to dust.
A mirror hung beside it. This time, it showed him asleep.
Chapter 8: The Real Room
It was smaller. Bare. One chair. One screen.
On the screen, he watched himself—walking, turning, choosing. Every version. Every room. A multiverse of futility.
The voice came back. “You’ve been here before.”
He nodded.
“You designed it.”
He nodded again.
“Why?”
“To know if I deserve to leave.”
“And do you?”
He turned off the screen.
And sat.
Chapter 9: Observer
As he sat, the room grew still. No hum. No voice. Just silence.
A second screen lit up.
Someone else.
A woman, waking up on the floor. In a concrete room. With one door. Slightly ajar.
He leaned forward, watching.
Welcome, the voice said.
About the Creator
Alpha Cortex
As Alpha Cortex, I live for the rhythm of language and the magic of story. I chase tales that linger long after the last line, from raw emotion to boundless imagination. Let's get lost in stories worth remembering.



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