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Mystical treasures of the Forgotten Isle

An unreliable narrator tale.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished about a year ago 6 min read

Gather 'round the flickering fire, for I have a tale to tell—a tale of treacherous seas, hidden riches, and a deserted mansion that defies reason.

Do you seek tales of creaking floorboards, flickering candles, and the chill of unseen eyes upon your neck. Very well, let us venture into the shadowed corridors of a long abandoned mansion—a place where reality blurs, and the past peeks through cracked plaster.

But beware the teller of distant tales, for things are not always what they seem. They speak of forgotten Isles, ghosts and treasures most plenteous.

Before we begin our treasure hunt, I must tell you of “The Labyrinth of Whispering Oaks”.

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Once, long ago, the island had been a part of the rich heritage of the English countryside. A wealthy merchant built the imposing manor known as Whispering Oaks for his family. Disaster had struck and no one knows what happened, but the entire family had vanished one weekend and were never seen again.

Its stone walls bore the weight of centuries, and its windows held secrets like trapped souls. The locals spoke of it in hushed tones, for they knew that some doors should remain locked, even to the curious.

Lady Evelyn Hartwood was a storyteller of the highest order. She had inherited the manor from her eccentric uncle, Lord Percival Ravenscroft, a man rumored to converse with the wind and dance with devils. Lady Evelyn, with her porcelain skin and eyes like storm clouds, arrived at Whispering Oaks with a mixture of trepidation and fascination.

The manor’s grand entrance hall greeted her—an expanse of marble, faded tapestries, and a chandelier that dripped crystal tears. The air smelled of old books and decay. Lady Evelyn’s footsteps echoed as she ascended the grand staircase, her gloved hand trailing along the banister. She had come seeking answers—about her uncle, about the strange occurrences that plagued her dreams.

The first night, she heard it: a soft rustling, like silk brushing against stone. Lady Evelyn followed the sound to the library—a room lined with dusty shelves and leather-bound volumes. There, she found a portrait of Lord Ravenscroft, his eyes piercing and knowing. Beneath the portrait lay a hidden compartment, and within it, a yellowed letter.

The ink had faded, but the words echoed like ghosts:

"Dearest Evelyn,

Whispering Oaks is no ordinary mansion. Its walls harbor memories, and its corridors twist like the strands of fate. Seek the forgotten wing—the one that appears only during the full moon. There, you’ll find the key to unlock the labyrinth.

But beware: the house remembers. It whispers lies and truths, and its heart beats with ancient longing.

Yours in shadows,

P.R."

Lady Evelyn’s heart raced. She followed the moonlight to the forgotten wing—a corridor that seemed to stretch infinitely. Doors lined both sides, each with a tarnished brass knob. She chose one at random and stepped inside.

The room held a grand piano, its keys yellowed and brittle. Lady Evelyn hesitated, then played a haunting melody—a tune she’d never heard before. The walls trembled, and the floor shifted. The room transformed—a forest of twisted trees, moonlight filtering through leaves. The piano now stood on a moss-covered hill.

And so began her journey through the Labyrinth of Whispering Oaks. Each room led to another—a ballroom where phantom dancers twirled, a conservatory where roses bloomed in winter, a study where forgotten poets penned verses of madness. Lady Evelyn met spectral guests—a jilted bride, a war-weary soldier, a child with eyes like starlight.

The manor whispered to her: “Find the heart of the labyrinth.” But what was the heart? A hidden chamber? A lost love? Lady Evelyn’s mind blurred. Was she Lord Ravenscroft’s niece, or had she always been part of this spectral madness?

Finally, in a room bathed in phantom light, she found it—a mirror. Her reflection wavered, merging with the ghostly figures around her. She stepped through, and the manor collapsed like a house of cards.

When the villagers arrived, they found only an overgrown garden where Whispering Oaks had stood. Lady Evelyn? She became a legend—a woman who disappeared upon a moon filled night and still sang to the wind.

Haunted mansions are not mere structures; they are thresholds to other realms. If you ever chance upon one, tread carefully, for the walls remember, and the past yearns to be heard.

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On an evil tempest-tossed night, Captain Bartholomew “Bart” Blackwood stood at the helm of the Sea Serpent, his one good eye scanning the horizon. His crew—ragtag, superstitious, and loyal—muttered prayers to heathen gods. They were bound for the Forgotten Isle, a place whispered about in hushed tavern corners, where legends and nightmares intertwined.

Bart was an unreliable narrator, prone to exaggeration and to the drink. His missing eye? A bar brawl, he claimed, though some said it was a curse from a vengeful mermaid. His map to the treasure? Etched on the back of a rum-soaked handkerchief.

The island emerged from the mist—a jagged silhouette against the moon. The Sea Serpent scraped its hull on hidden rocks, and the crew stumbled ashore, eyes wide with greed. Bart led them through a tangled jungle, where vines curled like tendrilled fingers with hidden secrets and eerie shadows skulked like ghosts.

And there it stood: the deserted, rumored haunted Mansion. Its walls sagged, ivy-clad and defiant. Bart’s tale shifted with each telling. Some said it was cursed by a pirate queen betrayed by her lover. Others claimed it was built by ghosts who yearned for mortal company. Bart? He swore it was his childhood home, though he’d never in his life set foot on the island.

Inside, the air clung like cobwebs. Candle flames flickered, casting elongated shadows on cracked wallpaper. Bart’s wooden leg creaked as he climbed the grand staircase, each step echoing with the weight of centuries. His crew followed, eyes darting, nerves fraying.

In the library, Bart found the ancient tome—the key to the treasure’s location. But the words blurred, and he squinted, weaving his own narrative. “The doubloons,” he said, “are hidden beneath the weeping willow, guarded by a spectral parrot with a penchant for riddles.”

His crew exchanged glances. The weeping willow? There was no such tree on the island. And the parrot? Well, they’d seen any sign of it, spectral or otherwise.

As they dug in moonlit soil, Bart’s tale twisted further. He spoke of a love affair—his own, perhaps—between a mermaid and a cursed sailor. Their passion had birthed the treasure, he insisted. Doubloons kissed by saltwater tears.

But the island whispered. Shadows lengthened, and the mansion groaned. Bart’s crew grew restless. They wondered if the treasure was real or if they were pawns in a madman’s game. Bart’s eye gleamed with feverish intensity, and he muttered about sirens and forgotten oaths.

Then, the moon disappeared behind a cloud, the mansion shifted. Its walls bled memories, and the floorboards sighed. Bart led them to the weeping willow, where roots clawed at the earth. And there, beneath twisted roots, they found it—a chest of tarnished gold, jewels winking like lost stars.

Bart’s laughter echoed through the haunted halls. He clutched the treasure, eyes wild, and spun a final tale: “I am the mermaid’s son,” he declared. “Born of forbidden love. This gold is my birthright.”

But as the crew rowed back to the Sea Serpent, they glanced at Bart’s reflection in the water. His face—half-shadowed, half-moonlit—seemed to shift. Was he truly the mermaid’s son, or just a drunken sailor who’d stumbled upon fortune?

Captain Bartholomew Blackwood vanished that night, leaving behind only the echo of his laughter and a ship that sailed without him. Some say he became a ghost, haunting the Haunted Mansion, guarding the treasure he’d spun from thin air.

But remember this: unreliable narrators weave truth and fiction, and sometimes, the greatest treasure lies not in gold but in the stories we tell.

And there you have it—a tale of daring, deception, and doubloons. Perhaps you’ll find your own treasure someday, whether it be in the pages of a book or hidden on a distant shore.

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About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oh wow, he's the mermaid's son! Loved your story!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Oh, pirates, always seeking treasures. I wonder where I can find this haunted mansion, worth a visit.

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