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My Fading Wife

Result of ignorance

By Hemavathi JambulingamPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

Wife Started Fading away:

Dev and Priya, a married couple lived their life like an ordinary couple. Priya felt loneliness due to missed love and attention of Dev. Whenever she tried to discuss it with Dev, the discussion ended only in a fight. One day the fight get worsened and Priya asked divorce to her husband. Dev never expected it from Priya. He just went outside the house to calm down his own self and when he returned home and called Priya he didn't get any response from her. When he entered their room the sight he saw shook him to the core. Priya's lying body is slowly vanishing in the air and when he tried to save Priya, a voice boomed from wall and throw him away with force.

Moving to another world:

Dev, you didn't deserve Priya...She deserved to be happy, loved and treated with respect...

But, what have I done wrong to lose her???

You're going to see what you missed as her partner...You will be the first man to visualize how your wife will be treated by a perfect man....Just see it....

Dev is confused and he is dragged into a dream world. There he saw Priya with another man and she is enjoying every moment with him. He can see that her happiness reached her eyes. Both of them looked like a made for each other couple. The voice made Dev to listen their conversation. Priya is continuously talking with that man and her eyed never moved an inch away from him. At that moment Dev wanted to kill that man with his own hands. He calmed down himself and listened to Priya's words.

Priya's Confession:

I never thought you would love me this way..You are the person beyond my imaginary love life. You prioritize me over everything and everyone. Everyday when I wake up, I look forward to spend time with you. We are living together for 2 years and still I feel like a newly married woman. I love the unique nickname you gave me...I love to cook with you. I love the way you are feeding to me like a child and I want it till my death even after the birth of our child. I can say confidently that you will save me from any tragedy. You are my hope and you are the knight in shining armor of my life. You will be the last person I wish to see at the last moment of my life.

She said all those words with happy tears and the man wiped her tears with smile. He assured to live forever with her and soon the happy moment turned into hot kissing moment. Dev is burning inside with jealous and anger and shouted why he is alive to visualize this horrible scene...The voice answered Dev with the mocking words....

Mistakes of Dev:

Ohh....Really Dev....Do you remember how you forgot to celebrate your anniversary but celebrated your birthday with your friends???

Do you remember how she begged you for her attention???

By the way, you are still in contact with your ex-girlfriend in the name of friendship...

You didn't cheat her physically....But, emotionally you treated her like no one and left like her an orphan. She isn't your maid. She also deserved to be treated well and in this dream world, she is living her life soulfully and you aren't needed in her life....

Dev's Realization on love:

Listening to this, Dev kneeled down on the floor and cried his heart out after realizing his mistake. He prayed to god for one more chance in Priya's life. He literally begged to the voice to get back Priya..He didn't get any reply from the voice and due to the lot of crying he fainted on the floor. Suddenly he heard Priya's voice and woke up. He was lying in his bedroom and Priya is spraying water on his face to wake him up. She is relaxed after seeing him awake and Dev immediately hugged Priya like he is hugging her mom.. Priya exclaimed and explained her dream to him. It was the same scene visualized by Dev but the only difference is he is replaced with the mysterious man presence and Priya only dreamt of happy life with him. Dev promised Priya to fulfill all her wishes and he will make her dream as reality....

familyFantasyLoveShort StoryYoung Adult

About the Creator

Hemavathi Jambulingam

Overthinker

Daydreamer

Teacher by profession

Love to read romantic novels

Working to make my dream come true

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