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Mr. Obnoxious Fox

Hare is the most beautiful dancer in the forest, but recently he met an obnoxious Mr. Fox.

By Stephane PerezPublished 3 years ago 5 min read

Hare is the most beautiful dancer in the forest, but recently he met an obnoxious Mr. Fox.

That day was the first performance of a planned tour of ninety-nine shows. She put on her carefully prepared costume and carefully danced one of her best dances, the rabbit's dream was to dance the most perfect and amazing dance in the world.

The dance came to an end and not surprisingly won a full house, except for a voice that suddenly sounded a bit out of place.

"Such a cheerful tune, you should have a happier expression when dancing!" Mr. Fox shouted from the stage.

The rabbit glared at this first-time fox: "What do you know!"

"It's supposed to be!" Mr. Fox looked serious and seemed eager to argue.

The rabbit stomped his feet in anger and hurriedly thanked the curtain, thinking that the fox was a real spoilsport and must have come to pick a fight!

But after the rabbit's anger subsided, he thought about Mr. Fox's advice, and it seemed to make some sense ......

The second performance, the rabbit really tried to improve his expression, a smile on his face after the dance, the audience's emotions seem to be brought into the rabbit's performance, gave a thunderous applause.

The rabbit took a look at Mr. Fox sitting in the first row and thought proudly: there is nothing to say this time, right?

However, it was not to be, and Mr. Fox justifiably spoke: "Hare, you seem to have made a wrong move in the second section!"

The rabbit gritted her teeth, but she couldn't refute it because the fox was right, she was too nervous and she did jump wrong in that place, but she still yelled at Mr. Fox in anger: "What do you know!"

When she got off the stage, Bunny vowed that for her third performance, she would not make any mistakes, and that she would be perfect in the future, so that the fox would not be able to pick a single thorn in her side! For this reason, she practiced the dance more diligently and with more motivation.

Do you think Mr. Fox is specialized in picking other people's problems for fun? But in fact, Mr. Fox is very frustrated.

He asked his good friend Bear: "I actually like Bunny a lot, but why does she seem to hate me?"

"You keep picking her faults, it's strange if she likes you!"

"That's because I know Hare loves to dance, and I want her to improve and help her dance the perfect dance as soon as possible to fulfill her dream." The fox bristled and suddenly saw Hare passing by, he raised his hand ready to say hello: "Hi Hare ......"

The little rabbit glared at him, grunted and turned his head away.

Mr. Fox stayed where he was, more frustrated, he knew that the rabbit probably misunderstood his intentions, but the proud Mr. Fox would never allow himself to stoop to apologize and show goodwill.

Later, the third, fourth, fifth ...... many, many times the performance, Mr. Fox did not miss the rabbit's performance.

He still, as before, precisely and meticulously found the little flaws of the rabbit, and justified them to her.

The rabbit slowly got used to this discordant voice, and she went from being extremely angry at first to just wanting to dance better next time so that the fox would have nothing to say.

Of course, in addition to Mr. Fox, a fake fan who only finds her flaws, the rabbit is never short of admirers who praise her, Shiba Inu is one of them, every time Shiba Inu will praise her performance, using the most magnificent words to praise her.

This performance was no exception, and Shiba Inu shouted at her, "Bunny is so beautiful, she is just like a heavenly girl!"

Bunny smiled sheepishly and expressed her gratitude, but in her mind she couldn't help but think of that dreadful fox again, who had just told her that she was not strong enough to spin around.

Wait, how to think of the fox again! But speaking of the fox, Hare had to admit that besides the little Shiba Inu, Mr. Fox was another audience member who had been with her the longest. She had performed dozens of shows, and everyone was getting a little tired of watching, and the audience on stage was getting smaller and smaller ......

The night before the show she was very nervous because she didn't have the confidence that she could really accomplish her dream: to dance the most perfect dance in the world.

"Chirp, chirp, chirp~" a carrier pigeon handed a letter from the window, "Hare, this is an anonymous letter for you."

The little rabbit opened the letter, and it was written in a handwriting she had never seen before, with only one line: "Little rabbit who is trying to follow her dream, in fact, you have been shining, tomorrow you will be able to dance the most perfect dance in the world!

I don't know why, but the letter was not signed, but she instantly guessed who it was. The rabbit's heart was full of mixed feelings, which eventually turned into a sentence: Stupid fox ......

The last performance, the forest had the worst weather ever, lightning and thunder, torrential rain, the wind was so strong that the trees were almost uprooted.

The rabbit stood on the stage, looking at the stage empty, even the little Shiba Inu who had been supporting her did not come, and the smelly fox also disappeared, she felt very lost.

But Bunny was still ready to dance, even if there was no one in the audience, she still wanted to dance the most perfect dance in the world!

"Pop!" Suddenly there was a loud bang.

The rabbit looked over in surprise and realized that it was Mr. Fox who had fallen and was covered in mud and looked as if he was in a hurry, and that he looked as if he was in a lot of trouble.

Mr. Fox, who had rushed here in the rain, was embarrassed to even lift his head, and actually ran too fast and fell directly in front of the rabbit, which was too humiliating!

"Puff ~" the little rabbit covered his mouth and snickered.

"What are you laughing at! It's just an accidental fall!"

"It's such bad weather, and you're coming to see my show?" The rabbit said, and extended his hand to Mr. Fox.

"Just passing by, just passing by!" Mr. Fox suddenly squirmed.

The ninety-ninth tour performance, in the midst of this storm and thunder, the little rabbit finally danced the most perfect and amazing dance.

Because, that always prickly Mr. Fox, this time also applauded.

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Stephane Perez

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