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MI AMOR

Her heart thumped in counterpoint to the rhythm of her steps.

By Bishnu Kumar Published 2 years ago 3 min read
MI AMOR
Photo by Michael Loftus on Unsplash

The humid Havana air clung to Elena like a second skin as she hurried down the cobbled street, the worn leather slippers slapping a staccato rhythm against the stones. Mi amor, she thought, clutching the small, ornately wrapped package tighter to her chest. My love is finally ready after all these weeks.

Her heart thumped in counterpoint to the rhythm of her steps. Tonight, she would finally confess her feelings to Miguel, the handsome book vendor whose sun-kissed smile and twinkling eyes had captured her soul since she first stumbled upon his stall months ago. His love for stories matched her own, and his gentle, knowledgeable explanations of classic literature had drawn her in like a moth to a flame.

Reaching the plaza, she searched for his familiar blue awning. Relief washed over her when she spotted it, and Miguel immersed himself in conversation with a customer. He had a way of listening: his head tilted and his brows furrowed in genuine interest, making each person feel like the only one in the world.

Tonight, it would be her.

As she drew closer, Miguel glanced up, and a jolt of electricity shot through her. His smile widened, illuminating the vibrant hues of the setting sun over the malecón. "Elena!" he boomed, his voice warm and welcoming. "Just the sight you needed to brighten my evening."

She felt her cheeks flush. "Buenas noches, Miguel," she stammered, the practiced words fleeing her mind.

He tilted his head, his smile a silent question. Taking a deep breath, she blurted, "I brought you something."

His brow furrowed in surprise, but before he could ask, she thrust the package towards him. "A small token of my appreciation," she mumbled, unable to meet his gaze.

His fingers brushed hers as he took the package, sending shivers down her spine. "Elena," he began, his voice husky, "this is..."

"Please," she pleaded, finally looking up, her voice trembling. "Open it."

He slowly unwrapped the paper, revealing a beautiful leather-bound journal, its cover embossed with a swirling calligraphy design. His eyes widened in awe.

"It's..." he faltered, speechless.

"I made it myself," she confessed, her voice barely a whisper. "Each page has a story waiting to be written. Your stories."

He gently stroked the cover, his thumb tracing the intricate design. "This is incredible, Elena. It's...perfect."

He looked at her then, his gaze intense, and her breath hitched. "But why?"

Elena took a deep breath, her heart pounding like a hummingbird trapped in her chest. "Because, Miguel," she started, her voice barely above a whisper, "your stories... they make me feel alive. They ignited a fire in my soul that I didn't know existed."

Her words hung in the air, heavy with unspoken emotion. Miguel's eyes softened, mirroring her own vulnerability. His hand reached out, hesitantly at first, then cupping her cheek.

"Elena," he murmured, his voice husky with emotion, "your words... they touch me deeper than any story ever could."

It was like coming home.

They pulled away, breathless, with their eyes locked. A blush bloomed on Miguel's cheeks, mirroring the one warming her own. "Elena," he said, his voice thick with emotion, "I feel the same way."

Relief and joy flooded her, washing away the years of self-doubt and yearning. She had confessed, and he had felt it too.

The rest of the evening was a blur of whispered conversations, stolen kisses, and shared dreams. Under the starlit sky, they talked about stories, about life, and about their hopes and fears. With each shared word, their connection deepened, the invisible threads binding them growing stronger.

As the clock struck midnight and the first rays of dawn began to paint the sky with soft hues of pink and orange, Miguel took her hand and walked her home. At her doorstep, they stopped, a comfortable silence settling between them.

"This is the beginning," he said, his voice low and warm. "Our story."

Elena smiled, her heart overflowing with happiness. "Mi amor," she breathed, the words finally falling effortlessly from her lips. "Our story."

As he leaned in for one last kiss, she knew this was just the first chapter. Their story, like the blank pages of the journal she had gifted him, was waiting to be written, filled with love, laughter, and perhaps even a few tears, but they would face them.

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About the Creator

Bishnu Kumar

Passionate writer weaving poetry and fiction into captivating tales. Exploring emotions, imagination, and storytelling on Vocal Media. Join me on this literary journey of words and creativity!

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